Twisted Thoughts
I lie leisurely on a bed of burning coals
My soul freezes to its core,
The night tears out the heart of the day
and swallows the sun whole
as my tears ravage the spirit of the sea.
~Contest: A Brian Strand 2 to 5 line contest.
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