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Twisted Love

If you gonna hurt me dont hurt me like this paralyze me a hug kill me with a kiss Burn me with passion and and drown me with with love without you in my life im just a vegetable cant move and if i cant have you might as well pull the plug Just leave me hanging high and dry from the tree of misery and despair sentence me to 25 to life on death row with you, at the end put me in the electric chair Kidnap me put me in the basement of your heart tie me up in ropes and chains im your prisoner of love, make me your slave Im dedicated to you so no i wont run muzzle me and chop off my hands if i try to call 911 With you forever is where i want to be so with you forever and all eternity is where i'll R.I.P.

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Skat A

Date: 8/20/2016 5:06:00 AM

Russell, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2016 2:09:00 PM

- A deep and powerful first poem, Russell - Well done - Welcome to Poetry Soup - // Sun :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2016 10:34:00 PM

Russell, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@