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Twisted Heartstrings

We broke up But never dated. Cause I fell so deeply in love, With a girl who never related. How could my heart be so dumb, Maybe its what it means to be young. Then why is my soul left in taters, While she seems unshattered? The love that a lonely child craves, Perhaps makes me misbehave. So quick to fall. But now I’m left with nothing at all. leading me to question, "what did I do wrong?" cause though I was blind to see, all along it must have been me.

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Date: 8/1/2023 9:38:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/30/2023 10:50:00 PM
touching poem, indeed, in France, we say " les histoires d'amour finissent toujours mal" I know that, thanks for sharing
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