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Oh those muddled webs some weave When folks get more than we perceive While truth hoards dust upon the shelves The gears enmesh to grease themselves Such myst'ries are left to dear Bo Peep How some 'round here e'er get to sleep.

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Lin Lane

Date: 11/16/2019 1:30:00 PM

Tis said the guilty have no conscience. I read you loud and clear.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2019 7:51:00 AM

Indeed, you are right, Lin - thank you so much for the kind words and understanding, Dear Friend - I pray you are well! :-) <3

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/14/2019 2:44:00 PM

Great poetry my friend. Ah, but sleep cometh to the righteous and the wretched both. As humanity has always had those that believe in self serving first and foremost as a faithful discipline. Time almost always yields truth, sooner or later. Be it hours, days, moths,years, decades or even many centuries later. Your poem speaks of a very sad and tragic truth. A fav,...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/18/2019 7:52:00 AM

Amen, Brother, I totally agree ... and you know whereof I speak! Blessings, my friend! :o)