Twist

The bed is just a mattress on the floor, 
but it has served it’s time well, 
the scene of many a tryst and tear. 
She’s sitting there now, 
on the edge, 
her shoulders slumped, 
her body facing me across the room, 
head turned, 
looking at the wall to her left. 
We’re both naked and sweaty; 
it’s a hot August day. 
Cities are always hot in August. 
That’s why Italians vacation in August. 
But I digress… 
We started furious, 
on a dead run,
no slow building 
toward the inevitable joining. 
In the midst, passion turned to anger, 
sweat to ice, 
and the taste in our mouths to iron. 
What was the twist? 
An old one:
the wrong name whispered. 
By me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fisher Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 6:34 AM
I like the 'taste of iron' -seems to seal the deal. And the title is catchy too.
Jordan Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Thanks for the comment. J
Jones Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 4:18 PM
Ooooooops...great poem.......jack
Jordan Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Thanks, Donna! J
Carrillo Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 12:48 PM
You suprised me with this one. At first I thought it was the dance back in the 60's. Very well written. Lucilla
Jordan Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 2:41 PM
I remember that dance quite well. Thanks for reading it. J
Hunter Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Oh Yikes! I really enjoyed this one, Jack...didn't see that coming!!!
Jordan Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 12:26 PM
I have my sneaky moments. Thanks for reading, Caleb. J
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