Beryl Edmonds Poet Haiku

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Twirl and Whirl - Nk

Twirl and Whirl - NK
though love may break
it won’t die 
but shine bright 
as a star
in the sky 
deep in heart
forever
in the mind’s eye. 

what’er will be is meant to be
love is a merry chance 
a dream that has come true
it’s waltzing in moonlight
in flowering romance
to music of the night 
slip on your dancing shoes 
twirl whirl, free heart and soul and dance.
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23rd September 2022

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Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick October 5, 2022 at 4:55 AM Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I appreciate your visit to my page a few days ago. Sorry so long in commenting back on one of your poems. Sara Beryl Edmonds October 5, 2022 at 11:53 AM Thank you Sara, I’m pleased you enjoyed reading this New-Ku form poem… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos September 28, 2022 at 8:14 AM Your poetry has its own SIGNATURE STYLE AND I LOVE YOUR SPECIAL WRITES AS I DO THIS ONE. GUESS ONE OF MY MISTAKES IS TO ANSWER IN CAPS. LOVE YOU MY FRIEND. HAVE NOT BEEN WELL - I WAS NEARLY SENT TO HEAVEN IF I WOULD EVER REACH THERE, HUGS BLESSINGS JENNIFER Beryl Edmonds September 28, 2022 at 5:07 PM Thank you Jennifer, I’m sorry that you’ve have been so unwell and I wish you a speedy recovery. For sure when the time comes there’ll be a welcome in heaven for you… Belle

Andrea Dietrich September 25, 2022 at 8:13 PM lovely as can be, Belle! What a whirl! Beryl Edmonds September 28, 2022 at 5:04 PM Thank you Andrea, very much appreciated… Belle

Gershon Wolf September 24, 2022 at 6:29 PM This poetic flower blossoms in the moonlight and the starlight, Belle. Hurrah! Lovely as can be!. :) Gershon Beryl Edmonds September 24, 2022 at 7:36 PM Thank you very much Gershon, I’m most appreciative of your lovely comment… Belle

Sotto Poet September 24, 2022 at 7:26 AM This form lends itself quite nicely to the poetry you crafted dear, Belle. I enjoyed reading it! Be blessed and enjoy your weekend. Beryl Edmonds September 24, 2022 at 7:34 PM Thank you Sotto, it’s good to try new poetry forms, I enjoy the challenge. Blessings, Belle

Victor Buhagiar September 24, 2022 at 2:21 AM You have to work hard to keep love alive and happy. Beryl Edmonds September 24, 2022 at 7:30 PM You certainly do Victor, it’s worth it though. Thank you… Belle Be

Jeff Kyser September 23, 2022 at 8:32 PM This poem works very well with this form. I enjoyed it! Beryl Edmonds September 24, 2022 at 7:27 PM Thank you Jeff, I joyed writing this in Charlie’s New-Ku form… Belle

Michael Tor September 23, 2022 at 7:35 PM Love this one Belle. I am sure Charlie will enjoy reading... Beryl Edmonds September 23, 2022 at 7:49 PM Thank you Michael, I do hope Charlie likes this poem written in his New-Ku form.. Belle