Notes About The Poem

Written 4th August, 2026 for Pyramid Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

The Clarity Pyramid is a poetry form designed and constructed by Jerry P. Quinn.

A Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all).- Center your poem if you can.

 

The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The Title of the poem is the one-syllable word of the first triplet, which is displayed in all Capital Letters. You can also Bold the capital letters.. (optional). This line is followed by a two-syllable line, and then a three-syllable line, both of which clarify the definition of the poem, or are synonyms for the title.

 

The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based around a life event contained within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title).  

 

The last line is 8 syllables, and is in "quotations", this line contains your own quote that defines the first word.

 

Twins

TWINS two hearts twofold grace I held you both close born silent in my arms morning came and held its breath "love can divide yet still be whole"
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MITRA Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:55 PM
This touched me deeply. There is something almost sacred in the image of two lives held together in one pair of arms, whilst even morning seemeth to pause before such an arrival. Thy discerning upon love’s division hath left me musing🤔—doth love, perchance, actually multiply when divided? Though, I confess, my mathematics grades were ever pathetically ill-equipped to settle so profound an equation. Yet “love can divide yet still be whole” lingereth beautifully; some truths the heart apprehendeth where arithmetic surrendereth. ✨
Smith  Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 9:56 PM
Your comment is gratefully received.
Volumes Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 6:44 PM
Smith  Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:29 PM
Does this mean your speechless.
Guptar Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:26 AM
Congratulations Alison on sharing the first place win in this contest with a cute take on the prompt so skilfully carved with imagination. Wishing you a blessed day.
Smith  Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 4:30 AM
Thank you Krishnanand Guptar.
Anaya Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:26 PM
💔ing , beautifully said each word carefully placed with love, sweet poet. Congratulations on your high placement Alison .💐
Smith  Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:30 PM
Thank you Anaya for your kind words.🦋✨️
bard Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Smith  Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Douglas🌹
bard Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Well done Alison blessings Douglas😍
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 1:29 AM
So poignant, Alison. Congrats on a very worthy win
Smith  Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 1:39 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your comment.❤️
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 1:30 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. I was delighted to see your name there. Way to go. 👍⭐. Sara K.
Smith  Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much Sara for your encouragement.💕
Poet Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful and exquisitely crafted poem, Allison.
Smith  Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 2:17 AM
Thanks Sotto. Sorry my response was slow , your comment slipped through the cracks.❤️
Borg Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 9:39 AM
You brave lady and wonderful poetess. It is very sad, but I am so happy to share the podium with you. May God accept them in his embrace amd bless you.
Smith  Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 2:18 AM
Thank you Pascal ... they guide me always.❤️
Kerr Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations Alison on your superb win with a superb write.🔥🔥🔥 Howard
Smith  Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Howard.❤️
May Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 8:37 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
Smith  Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:06 PM
Thank you for the contest and judging.❤️
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 8:16 PM
This is truly lovely, Alison. A winner in my book.
Smith  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 9:18 PM
Thank you Gershon❤️
Cunningham Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:03 AM
Sorry to see this wasn't fiction Alison, I'm sorry for your loss. Tom🌹
Smith  Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:06 AM
I have 2 wonderful grown children and 2 who keep an eye on me from heaven. Thank you Tom 💋
Hind Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:28 PM
wow, wow, moving work
Smith  Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:40 PM
This was a long time ago and yes it happened. 🕊️💔
Hind Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 11:29 PM
if this is a personal loss, I am sorry. love,
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