Twinkles Rising

Our nearest neighbor, planet Mars, Stark and barren twinkles with night stars - Earth watches from beside the lake. Dawn awakens each slithering snake. Life cycles repeat in rhythmic swells. Rising tides and crushing seashells © July 21, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/30/2010 1:49:00 PM

Ohhh, YES.....my chose! ;) Light & Love poetess

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2010 12:25:00 PM

VERY NICe. I like it mucho.Congrats, Dane ann. LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/29/2010 8:16:00 PM

Very nice and smooth transition. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/29/2010 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann for your win in Adeleke Adeite's contest "Sky, Soil, Sea". Love,Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/29/2010 10:09:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest with this lovely crystalline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/29/2010 8:39:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on another victorious poem in Adeleke's contest .. brilliant as always and another well deserved win my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/29/2010 4:46:00 AM

Congrats on your worthy win in my contest. Thanks for the support and surprise. Please keep your poetry pen alive and keep painting your poetry pad with your passionate pen. Let the creative caps stay! Love, always, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2010 11:22:00 AM

Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Dane Ann. Wishing you the best today and everyday. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/20/2010 9:53:00 PM

nice one, good luck in the contest