Twin Auroras

Streamers of smooth light--
luminous phenomenon
hovers the northern
and southern magnetic poles--
mesmerizing Auroras
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 19, 2009 at 7:40 AM
These phenomena is on top of my wish list to see before I die--I particularly liked your first 2 lines, the first line capturing it very nicely :) thanks as well for your wonderful comment on my haiku :) enjoy your day!
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September 25, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Friends who have seen these "streamers of smooth light" tell me it's quite magnificent to witness. Excellent tanka, Ismael! Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 4:29 AM
Beautiful. Keep writing. Sara
Canady Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 7:43 PM
Splendid View You've Given Us... In Alaska, they're Humbling to look at... MoonBee
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September 24, 2009 at 6:52 PM
I've seen them only once in Northern Minnesota!...beautiful Tanka! Ismael!... jim
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