Twilight's Dessert

love it

Yess....I scream ...U scream...Gimme summuh that Yum Yum Hun Choc'late sun, mix'd with hits uh white n' strawberry fun! I LOVE YOUR HAIKU! Long time no hear...I am in the middle of moving a fourth across the states! 7up

Enjoyed your creative Neapolitan write..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by...No contest entry just writing out on the porch..Sara

wow. i am so impressed with this. i thought mine was stupid and now i know how bad it really this. if i have time i;ll redo it like yours. very poetic. btw, i can't believe we're on at the same time! amazing! also, i responded to your mail :)

I desire to dive into the middle of this poem and eat my way back out. Delicious writing Andrea, have a lovely Sunday :)

This made me smile and have a desire to run out and get some... !!! Best wishes in the contest...love Michael

No more caffeine for you tonite, /andrea! ha ha. Hey, when are the next big bdays? ......wink wink.

Double duhhhh!!! I knew that...how could I forget? Thanks professor Andrea. You are correct. How's the back? Gwendolen

I would rename this fantastic haiku, Andrea....Neapolitan Sunset or Neapolitan Sky....superb picture I am conjuring in my mind..like a sand sculpture mixed by time.....You will reign in this one. Carolyn's is fabs too. Check hers out.....Hope your back is mending...I found out thru comments that you were aching,........feel better. Gwendolen

lovely imagery, Andrea. I feel quite hungry now

This poem is one of your best! You got me hungry for ice cream after reading it just once! You succeeded in your goal, great work!!

Nice descriptive write on this dessert Andrea. You made if sound like a natural wonder and in the mouth it probably is ha ha. Awesome. love phyl

oh this is just divine,and how cute to describe it as "raspberry pink sky" instead of the usual strawberry-- now I want a Neapolitan ice cream sandwich.... well I hope you're having a sweet day, sweetie... hugs to you....

Your view sounds delicious. Tony

I wrote Connie and asked her if we should be receiving each other's poetry on PFT. I'm sure you have posted, but I'm not getting your work. Love, Dave. The poem is yummy. I like the "raspberry pink sky."

wow andrea! this is beautiful, one of the best I've seen so far...I'm tempted to give this one a go (laying off the contests a bit at the mo)

Yum, Yum!!! I want some raspberry pink sky with whipped cream at dusk, please!!! Love it, Andie!

it's like alluding to a romantic scene, andie.. sweetness!! .. we don;t have neapolitan here, just something similar.. :) huggs, nette

Ahhh, finally a real haiku on this topic. Aces, Andrea! Hats off to you for pulling it off. Surely a winner in PD's contest. Love, Carolyn

I wonder how you compared icecream with the natural elements.Very nice haikus here.Best wishes.

Beautiful imagery, Andrea! Kim

Yummy... don't you know it's unfair to set temptation in the way of us people trying to keep the weight off. The dollops of whipped cream, OHHHHH NOOOOO. luv

I am on a low sugar diet. This poem is very tempting, indeed. What poem are you looking for? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

only you Andrea,,, only you,,, hahha,, oh! yes and Linda Marie,, anyways,,, i'm waiting,..p.d.