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Twilight's Clouds

Water color streaks of pink and blue where the sun sinks slowly out of sight. Something beautiful is passing through. Those angel wisps of radiant white are twilight’s clouds drifting into night. For the English Quintain Contest of Janice Canerdy

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/4/2017 10:51:00 AM

Congrats Andrea for this fascinating imagery of twilight. All the best. :) Sunita

Eve Roper

Date: 8/2/2017 6:32:00 PM

This is so lovely , Andrea, ... Congratulations on your win ... ~*

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/2/2017 4:06:00 PM

Like a beautiful painting! Congrats, my friend!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/2/2017 9:52:00 AM

Lovely imagery - glad to see this on the winners list.

Joseph May

Date: 8/2/2017 7:21:00 AM

Beautiful poem Andrea...Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/2/2017 12:43:00 AM

Andrea, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest! Janice

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/23/2013 9:14:00 PM

A pretty little visual poem. love phyl

Wayland Bunch

Date: 9/6/2013 11:10:00 AM

I like this poem. I somewhat like the english form of the Quintain myself, but am impressed on how many different forms you use. Good work, and it appears a belated congratulations are in order.

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/31/2013 6:53:00 PM

You couldn't have painted it better Petal, Congratulations. Take care, Richard

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 8:51:00 AM

wow Andrea, this is a xool winning poem... I'm still loving the way you highlighted the night... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 8:51:00 AM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 12:01:00 PM

Great winning work..Congrats...Sara

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/27/2013 6:35:00 PM

this is beautiful Andrea Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2013 4:02:00 PM

congrats on your win Andrea...

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 8:52:00 AM

You cannot write a poem that isn't top-notch !! Congratulations, Andrea!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/27/2013 8:16:00 AM

Fantastic piece! Congrats.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/27/2013 12:34:00 AM

another wonder Andy well done xx

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:27:00 PM

A nice win Andrea... ~Love ~~SKAT

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2013 8:15:00 PM

Another gem..congrats on your big win in my contest...its just beautiful. BG

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2013 4:39:00 PM

wow, a real beauty here, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2013 3:40:00 AM

I had missed this one..Reads like a winner to me..It has great poetic quality..Thanks for stopping by to read my work and comment..I decided that the one that I had thought I would go back and add a stanza or two was finished..I had looked at it before and said I might just leave it as is..Your comments encoourage me..I hope that this is a great day for you..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/19/2013 12:12:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Red Fiery

Date: 8/17/2013 12:24:00 PM

You are so blessed Andrea ..your pen flows so well...i loved this poem. All the best for this contest...cheers !

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/17/2013 7:04:00 AM

Serene and dreamlike. You wonderfully capture the peaceful feeling when the world is sliding into sleep.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/16/2013 10:54:00 PM

excellent write friend Andrea... I like this line...."Angelic Wisps of radiant white" :) thanks for your comment and soupmail I just read it today..I understand friend...Have a blessed weekend to you..hugs, Maria