Twilight's Clouds

Water color streaks of pink and blue where the sun sinks slowly out of sight. Something beautiful is passing through. Those angel wisps of radiant white are twilight’s clouds drifting into night. For the English Quintain Contest of Janice Canerdy
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U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Congrats Andrea for this fascinating imagery of twilight. All the best. :) Sunita
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 6:32 PM
This is so lovely , Andrea, ... Congratulations on your win ... ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Like a beautiful painting! Congrats, my friend!
Krampe Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Lovely imagery - glad to see this on the winners list.
May Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea...Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 12:43 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest! Janice
Babcock Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 9:14 PM
A pretty little visual poem. love phyl
Bunch Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:10 AM
I like this poem. I somewhat like the english form of the Quintain myself, but am impressed on how many different forms you use. Good work, and it appears a belated congratulations are in order.
Seal Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 6:53 PM
You couldn't have painted it better Petal, Congratulations. Take care, Richard
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:51 AM
soup mail
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:51 AM
wow Andrea, this is a xool winning poem... I'm still loving the way you highlighted the night... Linda
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Great winning work..Congrats...Sara
Morgan Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 6:35 PM
this is beautiful Andrea Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
May Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 4:02 PM
congrats on your win Andrea...
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 8:52 AM
You cannot write a poem that isn't top-notch !! Congratulations, Andrea!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 8:16 AM
Fantastic piece! Congrats.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 12:34 AM
another wonder Andy well done xx
A  Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:27 PM
A nice win Andrea... ~Love ~~SKAT
Gorelick Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Another gem..congrats on your big win in my contest...its just beautiful. BG
Horne Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 4:39 PM
wow, a real beauty here, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:40 AM
I had missed this one..Reads like a winner to me..It has great poetic quality..Thanks for stopping by to read my work and comment..I decided that the one that I had thought I would go back and add a stanza or two was finished..I had looked at it before and said I might just leave it as is..Your comments encoourage me..I hope that this is a great day for you..Sara
Devnath  Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Fiery Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 12:24 PM
You are so blessed Andrea ..your pen flows so well...i loved this poem. All the best for this contest...cheers !
Sirak Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 7:04 AM
Serene and dreamlike. You wonderfully capture the peaceful feeling when the world is sliding into sleep.
Liwayway Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:54 PM
excellent write friend Andrea... I like this line...."Angelic Wisps of radiant white" :) thanks for your comment and soupmail I just read it today..I understand friend...Have a blessed weekend to you..hugs, Maria
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