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Twilight's Call

Seagull song with no beginning
Clouds that end in silent blue
Empty valleys in stone canyons
Echo calls of days' adieu

Ripples on ancestral water
Stretch on beyond the coral hue
Leaving only twilight memories
Of the love, I found in you
written 2018.01.10

Copyright © Francis J Grasso | Year Posted 2018

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Tamanna Bangthai Date: 4/15/2019 11:12:00 PM It's beautiful poem! Like a new perspective into the matter of life and love ?? Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 4/19/2019 7:54:00 AM Thank you, Tamanna. ...Fran

Tonytocaa Camacho Date: 4/15/2019 2:51:00 PM Simply beautiful now that’s what I’m talking about ..wow tonytocaaxrb Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 4/19/2019 7:53:00 AM Thank you, Tonytocca. Happy you enjoyed reading it. ...Fran

Anna M Shepard Date: 4/15/2019 11:11:00 AM Well done! Love the imagery. Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 4/19/2019 7:49:00 AM Thank you, Anna. ...Fran

FJ Thomas Date: 4/10/2018 3:18:00 PM Fran this is such a beautiful piece. Then ending just makes you smile. Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 4/10/2018 4:51:00 PM Thank you, FJ. Glad to hear you enjoyed reading.... Fran

Line Gauthier Date: 1/17/2018 9:26:00 PM Charming poem. Congrats on your win, Francis. Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 1/19/2018 10:15:00 AM Thank you, Line. ...Fran

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/13/2018 10:50:00 AM Breathtakingly beautiful, I am enchanted by the sentiment, flow and all else so poetically delivered! Hi, I don't believe we've crossed paths, but remembering isn't my strong suit - anyway, what a great poem for being introduced to your talent! It set the bar high. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 1/15/2018 10:45:00 PM Thank you for your kind words, CayCay. Very happy you enjoyed this poem...Fran

Laura Leiser Date: 1/10/2018 4:12:00 PM This flows so beautifully, Francis! Well done :) Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 1/10/2018 5:16:00 PM Thank you, Laura. ...Fran

Silent One Date: 1/10/2018 4:08:00 PM That made me smile.. at least it was entered into a contest.. Have a pleasant evening... Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 1/10/2018 3:34:00 PM For a moment I thought this was for my contest... Very romantic Fran, but it seems this is about loss... Hope you are well.. Login to Reply Francis J Grasso Date: 1/10/2018 3:54:00 PM Hello Silent One... I am doing well, Thank you. Hope all is well with you. Thank you for the comments, they are very much appreciated. The poem was inspired by your contest. I originally had a pretty good start at it but my muse took over and this is what finally came out, so I entered it in Brian's contest... Fran