Twilight's Call

Seagull song with no beginning Clouds that end in silent blue Empty valleys in stone canyons Echo calls of days' adieu Ripples on ancestral water Stretch on beyond the coral hue Leaving only twilight memories Of the love, I found in you written 2018.01.10
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Bangthai Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 11:12 PM
It's beautiful poem! Like a new perspective into the matter of life and love ??
Grasso Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Tamanna. ...Fran
Camacho Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Simply beautiful now that’s what I’m talking about ..wow tonytocaaxrb
Grasso Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you, Tonytocca. Happy you enjoyed reading it. ...Fran
Shepard Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Well done! Love the imagery.
Grasso Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 7:49 AM
Thank you, Anna. ...Fran
Thomas Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Fran this is such a beautiful piece. Then ending just makes you smile.
Grasso Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Thank you, FJ. Glad to hear you enjoyed reading.... Fran
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Charming poem. Congrats on your win, Francis.
Grasso Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Thank you, Line. ...Fran
Godwin Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful, I am enchanted by the sentiment, flow and all else so poetically delivered! Hi, I don't believe we've crossed paths, but remembering isn't my strong suit - anyway, what a great poem for being introduced to your talent! It set the bar high. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Grasso Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Thank you for your kind words, CayCay. Very happy you enjoyed this poem...Fran
Leiser Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:12 PM
This flows so beautifully, Francis! Well done :)
Grasso Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Thank you, Laura. ...Fran
One Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:08 PM
That made me smile.. at least it was entered into a contest.. Have a pleasant evening...
One Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:34 PM
For a moment I thought this was for my contest... Very romantic Fran, but it seems this is about loss... Hope you are well..
Grasso Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Hello Silent One... I am doing well, Thank you. Hope all is well with you. Thank you for the comments, they are very much appreciated. The poem was inspired by your contest. I originally had a pretty good start at it but my muse took over and this is what finally came out, so I entered it in Brian's contest... Fran
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