Notes About The Poem

Aug 5, 2024
For: Trimeric Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Janice Canerdy

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Twilight -TRI

In twilight's glow, the world is still, 
Soft whispers dance on evening's breeze, 
The moon ascends, a silver thrill, 
With stars alight, the heart's at ease. 

Soft whispers dance on evening's breeze, 
They weave a tale of dreams gone by, 
Its gentle light in night's soft sigh. 

The moon ascends, a silver thrill, 
A beacon in the velvet sky, 
In twilight's glow, the world is shy. 

With stars alight, the heart's at ease,
Memeories flicker like stardust,
Catching a few will makes life bright.
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George Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:13 AM
This is so ingeniously done. A great entry for the contest. I hope this will be placed high. All the Best, dear Jay ji
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Isn't this a great form? I worked on mine last night. Just didn't post it yet. You used great imagery in yours
Greenhough Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 8:24 PM
It sounds like a perfect evening. Everything is restful. I'm lulled to happiness by these words. Good luck with the contest
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