Twilight Totem

chirping exhaust trails
of a streaming philharmonic

blue-winged panegyrics float in
on a breeze of murmurs

dazzling brainwaves prevail
upheavals of a dawning melody

sequels of an aurora psalm

silken song of a chickadee

twilight fascination
in strands of a woven sapphire

orchestral melodic line

a thalia chorus with notes of 
birch on a spring morning

4th Contest Place Winner

Written: June 21, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Paulette Calasibetta

June 26, 2022 at 9:37 AM

A lovely and engaging view you have penned. Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

Valsa George

June 26, 2022 at 1:49 AM

With each read the beauty of the poem is enhanced. Congratulations dear friend for your win !

Unseeking Seeker

June 24, 2022 at 9:11 PM

Outstanding in every way, from start to finish! Each re-read is delightful! Congrats on your win, dear Sotto

Mystic Rose Rose

June 24, 2022 at 12:19 PM

Every sound is accentuated in the springtime, and your poem sounds out like the beautiful chirp of a chickadee. Now this is what I call beautiful poetry, congrats on your win dear Sotto:)

Sam Kauffman

June 24, 2022 at 9:53 AM

What a charming scene of delights on wings of happiness and song Lasaad! Love "sequels of an aurora psalm," "on a breeze of murmurs" among so many other wonderfully fresh images and unique phrases. Congratulations on your win. Blessings on wings of music to you my friend!

Valsa George

June 24, 2022 at 9:13 AM

Beautiful birdsong and its mesmerizing effect are beautifully pictured in the poem as in the lovely painting here. All the Best in the contest dear friend !