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chirping exhaust trails of a streaming philharmonic blue-winged panegyrics float in on a breeze of murmurs dazzling brainwaves prevail upheavals of a dawning melody sequels of an aurora psalm silken song of a chickadee twilight fascination in strands of a woven sapphire orchestral melodic line a thalia chorus with notes of birch on a spring morning
4th Contest Place Winner Written: June 21, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/26/2022 9:37:00 AM
A lovely and engaging view you have penned. Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 6/26/2022 1:49:00 AM
With each read the beauty of the poem is enhanced. Congratulations dear friend for your win !
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Date: 6/24/2022 9:11:00 PM
Outstanding in every way, from start to finish! Each re-read is delightful! Congrats on your win, dear Sotto
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Date: 6/24/2022 12:19:00 PM
Every sound is accentuated in the springtime, and your poem sounds out like the beautiful chirp of a chickadee. Now this is what I call beautiful poetry, congrats on your win dear Sotto:)
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Date: 6/24/2022 9:53:00 AM
What a charming scene of delights on wings of happiness and song Lasaad! Love "sequels of an aurora psalm," "on a breeze of murmurs" among so many other wonderfully fresh images and unique phrases. Congratulations on your win. Blessings on wings of music to you my friend!
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Date: 6/24/2022 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful birdsong and its mesmerizing effect are beautifully pictured in the poem as in the lovely painting here. All the Best in the contest dear friend !
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Date: 6/22/2022 12:18:00 PM
A beautiful scene you have painted Sotto.
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Date: 6/21/2022 12:57:00 PM
Lovely sights and sounds you convey in this poem, Lasaad. So well written.
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