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Twilight Time

receding light induces shadows twilight's hidden stars shine till dark It's exhausting to reckon them don't get lost assessing less tasting the grace of time not to fumble it on the daybreak a pole star points in a precise way millions of people travel in safety since the dawn of time Lost in the middle of a sea approaching the coasts of land no stars in the sky, no setbacks in life drab and bereft of shine shows you what's not there hiding in plain sight simply flowers, no fragrance
Written: April 26, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/27/2022 4:48:00 AM
Great imagery and observations of twilight, Lasaad. All the best.
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Date: 4/26/2022 10:27:00 PM
The melody of the stars. Your observations are great. Wonder why Venus is the fist to appear, unless I'm wrong.
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