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Twilight Spring Fantasy

                                 

                                      5/7/2025



Twilight shimmers, in the purple poignancy at the birthing of our auspicious joyful Spring.

Let us love with abandon, dearest one, fragranced by the lilacs’ perfumed sweet timing!

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Fowler Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 7:12 AM
I danced my way through this beautifully lyrical song Pangie dear. Thank you! hugs :)
Romios Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 8:46 PM
Hi Prancer, what a great way to express your reaction to my poem it made me smile. Thank you very much, dear friend.. Hugs, Pangie
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 1:14 AM
This is very lyric and pleasing to hear. Blessings.
Romios Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Hi Victor~ so glad you enjoyed the lyricism with it. I did as well. I am not ignoring anyone by the way, Lust besetby vision changes requirinr less time here and everwhere. Hope you understand. Pangie.
M  Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Full of sweetness and light FOF….just like you haha! A lovely feel good poem …Debx
Romios Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Haha, Debbie. So don’t make me come to Australia to have some coffee with you.. are the fireman in Australia handsome as the ones in America? I bet they are.. i can be fun and serious too. Lilacs…Mum bought me some artificial lilacs, really big ones and I wore them on each side of my heas in a ballet dance in eighth grade. It was called the beautiful blue Danube, my toeshoes were dyed the color of lillacs and my dress was long, like a ballet dancers, not short. I really love dancing.! Pangie. FOF.
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May 9, 2025 at 12:18 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Twilight Spring Fantasy" write. What a pretty picture you have here. Love Both.... Oh, Lilacs what a pretty summer delight. Hugs... Have a wonderful day/weekend......
Romios Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 2:46 PM
Lilacs smell of angels wings, i think. I’m in my glory because there are no floaters in my vision.today. As I was telling Sam, there’s an exercise to relax your eyes …I do far too much brutality to them.And to discipline myself …it’s really difficult. But I am almost 88 without wearing glasses all my life. That is a blessing and I don’t choose ruin them in the final stretch so to speak.. LOL pangie. So.?. if you don’t see me commenting, I’m limiting myself on comments and writing.. it is a must Pangie.
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May 9, 2025 at 12:16 PM
What a lovely message, Pangie! Wonderfully picturesque and enchanting! Short and sweet as the life of the lilac plum or wisteria blooms! Hope your eyesight continue to improve. Stay cool this weekend. It looks like we are going to have several hot days before it cools down again! Maybe some rain!!! Blessing my friend.
Romios Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 2:40 PM
So glad you liked this simple, delightful write, Sam . And itis 92 where I am.. plus, I bet you are spit on about the sizzling days to come. I, too, want my vision, as it was. With being on lne too long(me) or any of us. Here is a simple,e solution if you are home 20 min on, 20 min off,20 min off.inever do that!……just brutal to my eyes! Take dare of your eyes! I doubt you as old as I am so I wish I knew this a lot earlier… None of our body parts are indestructible. But when we’re younger, we think we are., don’t we? Thanks, Sam. Stay cool…Pangie.xx
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May 8, 2025 at 12:26 AM
This is why I love short poems, Pangie...in a few lines you manage to write a delightfully sweet poem that is a real pleasure to read. ~ Have read your reply to Darlene....I'm glad that your eyesight is much better. ~ Regards // paul
Romios Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 3:09 PM
Paul. Yes, short poems, I )) dont mean slap words on paper. It is a definite skill~ I see you have turned into art. Thank you for reading that very long comment to Darlene..What poets do that? You)) What has happened since that comment………is that the those floaters are completely gone , huzzah.I was doing acupuncture exercise and they are gone.. The eye doctor wanted to do cataract surgery and I said a Powerful NO. My regular MD saw my results from the hospital CAT scan and the carotid arteries..and he that said he agreed, but it amazes me the solutions I have found on sites like YouTube that work so well well!You know….life is a joy and as you said, there should be more love on our earth!Pangie
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May 7, 2025 at 2:11 PM
A very sweet one indeed, Pangie! Love it! Bob
Romios Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 3:46 PM
A perfect comment from a most standby, perfect friend.take care and hugs to Jeff!! Love, Pangie
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May 7, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Hello Panagiota, I enjoyed this poem. It will be my fav. Hugs. Darlenexxx
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May 7, 2025 at 3:42 PM
You know how to do it very well. I do not know how you do it. You write romantic poems very well. Hugs /Darlene/ xxx
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May 7, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Hello Panagiota, You are very welcome Panagiota. Oh, I am happy to hear that the floaters are gone. yes i do appreciate this miracle. Oh you are vedry welcome. You write a great romance poem. i have no clue how to write a romantic poem.
Romios Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Darlene, I think I will have to make you my favorite poet. You are honest kind, and you never ignore me.. you have integrity are big parts in my life. Thank you Also for supporting me in my concern about my eyesL I wanted you to know that they are 100% better. What I did was change the background on my iPad screen to a white background not a black background and it’s easier to type on and the floaters are gone.. I thought you would appreciate that miracle. Better than having cataracts taken out thank you very much.. I don’t dig surgery, especially on my eyes. Let us celebrate. Oh, and thank you for being concerned about my family and my cat and all you ask about about how Eddie is doing. You show a real concern in that you go beyond poetry… as a person and I wanted to salute you for that and thank you.. Pangie , and the fourth, thank you for making it a fav! I never try to be the greatest poet on the block because I’m not. I just am who I am. Pangie xx
Eagle Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 11:35 AM
A wonderful creative poem for today. I really enjoyed this one.
Romios Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 12:54 PM
I am so glad you liked this, took me quite a while to get this one done as simple as it looks, danke! Pangie…
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