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Twilight Requiem

There is beauty in the dying of the day where shadows lengthen in the dusk waters ripple with enchanted hush as twilight chases the sunlight away. Stanza from Dying of the Day poem written on 10/17/2019

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/29/2020 5:12:00 PM

Laura, a beautiful stanza from a truly magnificent poem. Belle

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/29/2020 9:00:00 PM

Thank you, Belle! :)

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 1/15/2020 3:16:00 AM

Beautiful.

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2020 8:21:00 AM

Thank you, Lady :)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/14/2020 10:16:00 AM

Congrats Laura for your placement in Greg's contest!

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/14/2020 4:18:00 PM

Thank you, John :)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/9/2020 9:56:00 AM

It's amazing how one verse in a poem can stand alone as a poem with meaning. I'm enjoying these excerpts for the contest. This one Laura is a sure winner!

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/13/2020 7:02:00 PM

Thank you, John! Your high opinion means so much to me.

Robertina B.

Date: 1/6/2020 5:33:00 PM

Your write is absolutely breathtaking, Laura.. A beautiful gem that shines!! Really enjoyed.. Many blessings!

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/6/2020 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Robertina! I really appreciate your kind comment! :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/6/2020 10:42:00 AM

Poetry at its best..Beautiful..

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/6/2020 6:09:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jenish! I am so glad you think so! :)

Muddasar Javad

Date: 1/2/2020 12:55:00 AM

oh my gosh this poem is amazing!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/27/2019 7:41:00 AM

Simply Beautiful, Laura!! An instant fave for sure. Aurora bright write. Love and peace forever.

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/29/2019 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie! :)

Silent One

Date: 12/22/2019 2:16:00 PM

Now that iS great imagery. Great choice!

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/22/2019 3:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Silent! Your comment made my day! :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/21/2019 12:55:00 PM

Great composition for the service for the dead where the dead is the day itself; the requiem is brief beacuse 'the day' would appear the next day. Thankful for this nice poem Laura. Hugs.

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/21/2019 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for your kind compliments, Rajat. So happy you enjoyed this! :)