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Twilight Requiem

There is beauty in the dying of the day where shadows lengthen in the dusk waters ripple with enchanted hush as twilight chases the sunlight away. Stanza from Dying of the Day poem written on 10/17/2019

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Date: 9/29/2020 5:12:00 PM
Laura, a beautiful stanza from a truly magnificent poem. Belle
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/29/2020 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Belle! :)
Date: 1/15/2020 3:16:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Lady :)
Date: 1/14/2020 10:16:00 AM
Congrats Laura for your placement in Greg's contest!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/14/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, John :)
Date: 1/9/2020 9:56:00 AM
It's amazing how one verse in a poem can stand alone as a poem with meaning. I'm enjoying these excerpts for the contest. This one Laura is a sure winner!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/13/2020 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, John! Your high opinion means so much to me.
Date: 1/6/2020 5:33:00 PM
Your write is absolutely breathtaking, Laura.. A beautiful gem that shines!! Really enjoyed.. Many blessings!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/6/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina! I really appreciate your kind comment! :)
Date: 1/6/2020 10:42:00 AM
Poetry at its best..Beautiful..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/6/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenish! I am so glad you think so! :)
Date: 1/2/2020 12:55:00 AM
oh my gosh this poem is amazing!
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Date: 12/27/2019 7:41:00 AM
Simply Beautiful, Laura!! An instant fave for sure. Aurora bright write. Love and peace forever.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/29/2019 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie! :)
Date: 12/22/2019 2:16:00 PM
Now that iS great imagery. Great choice!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/22/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Silent! Your comment made my day! :)
Date: 12/21/2019 12:55:00 PM
Great composition for the service for the dead where the dead is the day itself; the requiem is brief beacuse 'the day' would appear the next day. Thankful for this nice poem Laura. Hugs.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/21/2019 2:20:00 PM
Thank you for your kind compliments, Rajat. So happy you enjoyed this! :)
Date: 12/19/2019 6:30:00 PM
Beauty shows in your pen. Well picked for your entry. Best of luck in the contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/19/2019 6:39:00 PM
Thank you, Gregory! :)
Date: 12/19/2019 6:30:00 PM
Very lovely!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/19/2019 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)
Date: 12/19/2019 5:00:00 PM
Beautiful Laura. A wonderful selection for the contest. This one could stand alone on its own. Best wishes in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/19/2019 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! :)