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Twilight Requiem

There is beauty in the dying of the day
where shadows lengthen in the dusk
waters ripple with enchanted hush
as twilight chases the sunlight away.









Stanza from Dying of the Day poem
written on 10/17/2019

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Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/29/2020 5:12:00 PM Laura, a beautiful stanza from a truly magnificent poem. Belle Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 9/29/2020 9:00:00 PM Thank you, Belle! :)

Lady Labyrinth Date: 1/15/2020 3:16:00 AM Beautiful. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 1/15/2020 8:21:00 AM Thank you, Lady :)

John Hamilton Date: 1/14/2020 10:16:00 AM Congrats Laura for your placement in Greg's contest! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 1/14/2020 4:18:00 PM Thank you, John :)

John Hamilton Date: 1/9/2020 9:56:00 AM It's amazing how one verse in a poem can stand alone as a poem with meaning. I'm enjoying these excerpts for the contest. This one Laura is a sure winner! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 1/13/2020 7:02:00 PM Thank you, John! Your high opinion means so much to me.

Robertina B. Date: 1/6/2020 5:33:00 PM Your write is absolutely breathtaking, Laura.. A beautiful gem that shines!! Really enjoyed.. Many blessings! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 1/6/2020 6:08:00 PM Thank you so much, Robertina! I really appreciate your kind comment! :)

Jenish Somadas Date: 1/6/2020 10:42:00 AM Poetry at its best..Beautiful.. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 1/6/2020 6:09:00 PM Thank you very much, Jenish! I am so glad you think so! :)

poemtheart poemtheart Date: 1/2/2020 12:55:00 AM oh my gosh this poem is amazing! Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/27/2019 7:41:00 AM Simply Beautiful, Laura!! An instant fave for sure. Aurora bright write. Love and peace forever. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 12/29/2019 3:37:00 PM Thank you, Freddie! :)

Silent One Date: 12/22/2019 2:16:00 PM Now that iS great imagery. Great choice! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 12/22/2019 3:29:00 PM Thank you so much, Silent! Your comment made my day! :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 12/21/2019 12:55:00 PM Great composition for the service for the dead where the dead is the day itself; the requiem is brief beacuse 'the day' would appear the next day. Thankful for this nice poem Laura. Hugs. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 12/21/2019 2:20:00 PM Thank you for your kind compliments, Rajat. So happy you enjoyed this! :)

Na Na Date: 12/19/2019 6:30:00 PM Beauty shows in your pen. Well picked for your entry. Best of luck in the contest Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 12/19/2019 6:39:00 PM Thank you, Gregory! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 12/19/2019 6:30:00 PM Very lovely! Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 12/19/2019 6:38:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Chris Green Date: 12/19/2019 5:00:00 PM Beautiful Laura. A wonderful selection for the contest. This one could stand alone on its own. Best wishes in the contest. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 12/19/2019 6:38:00 PM Thank you, Chris! :)