Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Twilight Requiem

There is beauty in the dying of the day
where shadows lengthen in the dusk
waters ripple with enchanted hush
as twilight chases the sunlight away.









Stanza from Dying of the Day poem
written on 10/17/2019

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Beryl Edmonds September 29, 2020 at 5:12 PM Laura, a beautiful stanza from a truly magnificent poem. Belle Laura Leiser September 29, 2020 at 9:00 PM Thank you, Belle! :)

Lady Labyrinth January 15, 2020 at 3:16 AM Beautiful. Laura Leiser January 15, 2020 at 8:21 AM Thank you, Lady :)

John Hamilton January 14, 2020 at 10:16 AM Congrats Laura for your placement in Greg's contest! Laura Leiser January 14, 2020 at 4:18 PM Thank you, John :)

John Hamilton January 9, 2020 at 9:56 AM It's amazing how one verse in a poem can stand alone as a poem with meaning. I'm enjoying these excerpts for the contest. This one Laura is a sure winner! Laura Leiser January 13, 2020 at 7:02 PM Thank you, John! Your high opinion means so much to me.

Robertina B. January 6, 2020 at 5:33 PM Your write is absolutely breathtaking, Laura.. A beautiful gem that shines!! Really enjoyed.. Many blessings! Laura Leiser January 6, 2020 at 6:08 PM Thank you so much, Robertina! I really appreciate your kind comment! :)

Jenish Somadas January 6, 2020 at 10:42 AM Poetry at its best..Beautiful.. Laura Leiser January 6, 2020 at 6:09 PM Thank you very much, Jenish! I am so glad you think so! :)

poemtheart poemtheart January 2, 2020 at 12:55 AM oh my gosh this poem is amazing!

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 27, 2019 at 7:41 AM Simply Beautiful, Laura!! An instant fave for sure. Aurora bright write. Love and peace forever. Laura Leiser December 29, 2019 at 3:37 PM Thank you, Freddie! :)

Silent One December 22, 2019 at 2:16 PM Now that iS great imagery. Great choice! Laura Leiser December 22, 2019 at 3:29 PM Thank you so much, Silent! Your comment made my day! :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty December 21, 2019 at 12:55 PM Great composition for the service for the dead where the dead is the day itself; the requiem is brief beacuse 'the day' would appear the next day. Thankful for this nice poem Laura. Hugs. Laura Leiser December 21, 2019 at 2:20 PM Thank you for your kind compliments, Rajat. So happy you enjoyed this! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 19, 2019 at 6:30 PM Very lovely! Laura Leiser December 19, 2019 at 6:38 PM Thank you, Evelyn! :)

Na Na December 19, 2019 at 6:30 PM Beauty shows in your pen. Well picked for your entry. Best of luck in the contest Laura Leiser December 19, 2019 at 6:39 PM Thank you, Gregory! :)

Chris Green December 19, 2019 at 5:00 PM Beautiful Laura. A wonderful selection for the contest. This one could stand alone on its own. Best wishes in the contest. Laura Leiser December 19, 2019 at 6:38 PM Thank you, Chris! :)