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Twilight Pensieri

Where will life take us tomorrow? Could the twilight speak ease to the soul? Can the firefly glow ease this sorrow? Or will the darkness consume us whole? "Could the twilight speak ease to the soul?" You whisper as the breeze whips our hair, "Or will the darkness consume us whole?" We beg the coming dawn to take us somewhere You whisper as the breeze whips our hair Laying under the stars, we ponder all night We beg the coming dawn to take us somewhere Asking God with all of our might Laying under the stars, we ponder all night Can the firefly glow ease this sorrow? Asking God with all of our might Where will life take us tomorrow? June 6, 2017 Pantoum: What will tomorrow bring contest

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/31/2017 8:12:00 AM

Wonderful read. Loved the flow.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/9/2017 9:21:00 AM

Superbly written Juli-Michelle...congrats!!! on your win...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2017 8:19:00 PM

Juli, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~*

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2017 2:24:00 PM

This is excellent. Good luck in the contest :)

Darren White

Date: 6/7/2017 3:05:00 AM

Fantastic pantoum, Juli-Michelle. I love using this form, and I particularly started reading your final stanza before reading the whole. Expertly done :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/6/2017 5:52:00 PM

I hope happiness...a wonderful contemplation Juli-Michelle

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/6/2017 5:38:00 PM

It's a mystery we'll never know. Truly beautiful write and I wish you good luck in the contest, Juli-Michelle :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/6/2017 4:41:00 PM

Hi Juli-Michelle , wow , I love soul and you really expressed beautiful descriptive write very enjoyable . I am looking forward to reading more :))) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 6/6/2017 4:30:00 PM

I wrote my very first Pantoum the other day and I found it to be very difficult, though I was pleased with the outcome and it was you who introduced me to the form so it is nice to read another from you. This was wonderful Juli-Michelle. I like how the beginning wraps around to end the entire piece so nicely. Wonderfully written.