Twilight of Misery

Distant volcano vents bedim 
the ever-changing azure welkin 
Drunk off demons carousing amuck 
in my metaphysical crepuscule
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Breedt Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Hi Ellie, Ive had the pleasure of reading all 15 of your poems and get the feel of it. You are gifted and I love your intelligent and intellectual style. This one is beautifully descriptive from the title down.. Your craft is quite rare and you really should write some more please. However, the quality of content is pleasing and I suspect a lot of thought went into all your work. Come on , dont you have pen and paper in Hawaii? Teasing here. But lets see some more. Eh?
Anne Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Hi, there Jannie! I thank you for the time you took to read all of my poems... it's truly appreciated. Your kind words have really fueled me with happiness and encouragement. I've been working on writing more stories and poems lately but have been reluctant to post any on here. I am going to post one shortly though, so feel free to take a peek! I'll be waiting for more posts from you as well :)
Stars Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 5:33 AM
yeah ... we really like the way this one reads out ... not a lot of words but totaly captured this reader in thought ... excellent ...
Anne Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Sorry for responding so late, but thank you!
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