Twilight of Memory

he tends his wife’s grave
and hears the wedding march - -
smiles and tears

For Andrea’s The Twilight of Memory contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 6:59 PM
sweet and deep... Congrats.. ~ Love ~ SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 3:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations on this heart touching write, Jack! Well done as usual. xxAnnalise
Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Oh, wow.....this one is so touching, yet it wrenches the heart. Well done, and beautiful Jack. Congratulations on a fine poem!
Gorelick Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 2:53 PM
So wonderfully touching. Congrats. Jack. BG
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 2:17 PM
True love....a wonderful win...congratulations
Lamoureux Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Sad and beautiful, congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Jack
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:18 PM
wow, Jack, had no idea this was yours. I always seem to pick yours for a high placement. That must be why we have so much in common!! I just love how you write!! Congrats.
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Says so much more than the sum of it's words. Nice, very nice.
Neels Avatar
December 29, 2013 at 9:49 AM
You brought this across beautifully Jack, a sad write but really beautiful. Happy New Year to you and yours my friend :) lfde
Anish Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 2:42 PM
Fine short poem here! Happy holidays to you and yours. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Collins Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Joe - Christmas accentuates it more. All the hullabaloo along with heartache. I'm sorry. You have touched me deeply. love, Kathy Happy Holidays seems somehow inappropriate together with your poem. Maybe peace is better.
A   Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:53 AM
Jack, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
Mehta Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 12:29 AM
Very creative and deep write with images, Jack
Sivey Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 5:25 PM
This is a beautiful and creative write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What an enlightening and outstanding piece, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Sad..Life issues some tough blows..Enjoyed reading your very emotive work today..Thanks for stopping by.Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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