Twilight of Memory

he tends his wife’s grave
and hears the wedding march - -
smiles and tears

For Andrea’s The Twilight of Memory contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/11/2014 6:59:00 PM
sweet and deep... Congrats.. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2014 3:00:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2014 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on this heart touching write, Jack! Well done as usual. xxAnnalise
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:58:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/12/2014 5:21:00 PM
Oh, wow.....this one is so touching, yet it wrenches the heart. Well done, and beautiful Jack. Congratulations on a fine poem!
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Date: 1/12/2014 2:53:00 PM
So wonderfully touching. Congrats. Jack. BG
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Date: 1/12/2014 2:17:00 PM
True love....a wonderful win...congratulations
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Date: 1/12/2014 8:13:00 AM
Sad and beautiful, congratulations.
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Date: 1/12/2014 12:33:00 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Jack
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:18:00 PM
wow, Jack, had no idea this was yours. I always seem to pick yours for a high placement. That must be why we have so much in common!! I just love how you write!! Congrats.
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Date: 1/1/2014 9:17:00 PM
Says so much more than the sum of it's words. Nice, very nice.
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Date: 12/29/2013 9:49:00 AM
You brought this across beautifully Jack, a sad write but really beautiful. Happy New Year to you and yours my friend :) lfde
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Date: 12/24/2013 2:42:00 PM
Fine short poem here! Happy holidays to you and yours. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/24/2013 12:50:00 PM
Joe - Christmas accentuates it more. All the hullabaloo along with heartache. I'm sorry. You have touched me deeply. love, Kathy Happy Holidays seems somehow inappropriate together with your poem. Maybe peace is better.
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:53:00 AM
Jack, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/23/2013 12:29:00 AM
Very creative and deep write with images, Jack
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Date: 12/22/2013 5:25:00 PM
This is a beautiful and creative write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What an enlightening and outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/22/2013 5:00:00 PM
Sad..Life issues some tough blows..Enjoyed reading your very emotive work today..Thanks for stopping by.Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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