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Twilight of Memory

he tends his wife’s grave
and hears the wedding march - -
smiles and tears

For Andrea’s The Twilight of Memory contest

deathhaiku

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 6:59:00 PM

sweet and deep... Congrats.. ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 3:00:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/12/2014 9:21:00 PM

Congratulations on this heart touching write, Jack! Well done as usual. xxAnnalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2014 5:58:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2014 5:21:00 PM

Oh, wow.....this one is so touching, yet it wrenches the heart. Well done, and beautiful Jack. Congratulations on a fine poem!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/12/2014 2:53:00 PM

So wonderfully touching. Congrats. Jack. BG

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 2:17:00 PM

True love....a wonderful win...congratulations

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 8:13:00 AM

Sad and beautiful, congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 12:33:00 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:18:00 PM

wow, Jack, had no idea this was yours. I always seem to pick yours for a high placement. That must be why we have so much in common!! I just love how you write!! Congrats.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/1/2014 9:17:00 PM

Says so much more than the sum of it's words. Nice, very nice.

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/29/2013 9:49:00 AM

You brought this across beautifully Jack, a sad write but really beautiful. Happy New Year to you and yours my friend :) lfde

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/24/2013 2:42:00 PM

Fine short poem here! Happy holidays to you and yours. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/24/2013 12:50:00 PM

Joe - Christmas accentuates it more. All the hullabaloo along with heartache. I'm sorry. You have touched me deeply. love, Kathy Happy Holidays seems somehow inappropriate together with your poem. Maybe peace is better.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 1:53:00 AM

Jack, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/23/2013 12:29:00 AM

Very creative and deep write with images, Jack

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/22/2013 5:25:00 PM

This is a beautiful and creative write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What an enlightening and outstanding piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2013 5:00:00 PM

Sad..Life issues some tough blows..Enjoyed reading your very emotive work today..Thanks for stopping by.Reads like a winner to me..Sara

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