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twilight moonrise

winged plump putti descend cumulus clouds.... silvered in a spring rainstorm they flit round maypole....lavender satin streaming i'm awed in hammock my love he's raptured to....twilight moonrise my quick a plundered vessel hope of the roses had dreamt....of reunion for arc of hearts to soar

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/19/2024 10:39:00 AM

Four very creative and unique monoku, Regina, all "descending" from your cherubs - all wonderfully tied together! Your word usage is so unique. Thank you for sharing your gift! Blessings of health and happiness to you!

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/5/2024 7:14:00 AM

So sorry I'm late getting back to you, Sam. Very thoughtful of you to come by, read my poem, comment positively. Thank you so much. Blessings to you.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 5:31:00 PM

Well done, Regina. Four Monoku make a fine poem. I like them all. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/5/2024 7:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Bill. You're such a supportive poetry friend. Have a warm and blessed poetry day. ~

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 4:28:00 PM

delightful string of Monokus, Gina. I enjoyed your Maypole reference...I wonder if folks today even know what one is? Well done...have a splendid evening, Sara

Regina Elliott
Date: 2/5/2024 7:20:00 AM

Hi Sara, I remember years ago reading about Maypoles and it dawned on me to use the reference in this springtime monoku. Thank you for reading and commenting positively. Blessings to you. ~

Tom Woody

Date: 1/14/2024 1:28:00 PM

I think you can do justice with any form Gina. You're a natural born poet

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/15/2024 4:53:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tom. You're very kind to say that. All the best to you. ~

Silent One

Date: 1/14/2024 1:15:00 PM

Four excellent monoku..the last one is my favourite..

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/15/2024 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Silent One. You're such a supportive poetry friend. Many blessings to you. ~