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Twilight Magic

Pearlescent sand glistens on your skin; I gaze into warm eyes;
their sheen is the radiant blue of waves caressing this shore.
As stars appear - glittering - I’m shimmering into you.

For the contest "Sweet Sijo"
Sponsored by Adeleke Adeite

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2011

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John Watt Date: 1/25/2022 12:57:00 PM Love the nature and romance in this one, especially great ending. "I'm shimmering into you". WONDERFUL Sijo, my friend. Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 12/26/2013 10:46:00 PM Andrea This is a very sweet and passionate write. Great job with the description and imagery. Thanks for the nice comment on my Christmas Wishes write. Hugs Login to Reply

Carol Fillmore Date: 3/27/2011 7:06:00 PM Andrea, "I'm shimmering into you." I do love this phrase... I see that I'm not the only person ... oink! a limp okra's comment also mentions it:) Thanks for the congrats for Creation2 making it through first round. So not expecting this! lol Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/27/2011 9:18:00 AM I really enjoyed this sijo, especially how you ended this so sweetly --loved that "shimmering into you" part :) --hugs sweetie and see you next time, ok? haha reading this reminded me to try writing a Sijo for Adeleke's contest-- lemme see now what I can come up with?? hugs again :) Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 3/23/2011 9:57:00 AM A beautiful write! Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/21/2011 8:56:00 AM A magical write Andrea, good luck for Leke's contest, love Wilma Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 3/20/2011 8:25:00 AM A magical poem, Andrea! Best of luck with this in Adeleke's contest!...All the best, Gert:) Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/20/2011 7:33:00 AM Very warm writing, your talent is al over this one!!!! Michael Likes!!! Love Michael Login to Reply

Farah Chamma Date: 3/19/2011 7:44:00 AM A magical poem indeed =) I have truly missed reading your work. Love, Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/18/2011 11:29:00 PM Enjoyed reading this poem and it is the last one before bed. It is way past bedtime . love phyl Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 3/18/2011 7:08:00 PM Great entry, Andrea. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Good luck. Thanks for your gracious comments. You and yours have a great weekend. luv Ralph Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/18/2011 4:49:00 PM A romantic scene of luv about to blossom Andrea. am sure Adeleke will luv this piece... good luck in the contest.. fancy words enhance this Sijo my friend.. now where is this beach? I am there luv.. Login to Reply

Ellen Fahey Date: 3/18/2011 4:04:00 PM Goosebumps!! Loved it!! Good luck! Ellen Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 3/18/2011 2:11:00 PM Definitely indefinable magical and flowing this piece from you Andrea! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/18/2011 2:09:00 PM Good luck with this very romantic work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/18/2011 1:11:00 PM Nice amalgamation of the feelings of love, Andrea Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/18/2011 11:31:00 AM That's beautiful, Andrea. So romantic! I imagined the plumber and his fiancee holding hands in the flooded hall when I saw the pic of Linda-Marie and her husband paddling in the sea LOL Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/18/2011 10:34:00 AM Very creative imagery, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/18/2011 10:15:00 AM smackaroos, dear girl! seems you're passionate slip is showing!! whooting and winning... now, who can top this?? lovely piece :) huggs, nette Login to Reply