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Twilight Magic

Pearlescent sand glistens on your skin; I gaze into warm eyes; their sheen is the radiant blue of waves caressing this shore. As stars appear - glittering - I’m shimmering into you. For the contest "Sweet Sijo" Sponsored by Adeleke Adeite

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John Watt

Date: 1/25/2022 12:57:00 PM

Love the nature and romance in this one, especially great ending. "I'm shimmering into you". WONDERFUL Sijo, my friend.

Robin Davis

Date: 12/26/2013 10:46:00 PM

Andrea This is a very sweet and passionate write. Great job with the description and imagery. Thanks for the nice comment on my Christmas Wishes write. Hugs

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/27/2011 7:06:00 PM

Andrea, "I'm shimmering into you." I do love this phrase... I see that I'm not the only person ... oink! a limp okra's comment also mentions it:) Thanks for the congrats for Creation2 making it through first round. So not expecting this! lol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/27/2011 9:18:00 AM

I really enjoyed this sijo, especially how you ended this so sweetly --loved that "shimmering into you" part :) --hugs sweetie and see you next time, ok? haha reading this reminded me to try writing a Sijo for Adeleke's contest-- lemme see now what I can come up with?? hugs again :)

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/23/2011 9:57:00 AM

A beautiful write! Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 8:56:00 AM

A magical write Andrea, good luck for Leke's contest, love Wilma

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/20/2011 8:25:00 AM

A magical poem, Andrea! Best of luck with this in Adeleke's contest!...All the best, Gert:)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 7:33:00 AM

Very warm writing, your talent is al over this one!!!! Michael Likes!!! Love Michael

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/19/2011 7:44:00 AM

A magical poem indeed =) I have truly missed reading your work. Love,

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/18/2011 11:29:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this poem and it is the last one before bed. It is way past bedtime . love phyl

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/18/2011 7:08:00 PM

Great entry, Andrea. Awesome piece. Enjoyed. Good luck. Thanks for your gracious comments. You and yours have a great weekend. luv Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 4:49:00 PM

A romantic scene of luv about to blossom Andrea. am sure Adeleke will luv this piece... good luck in the contest.. fancy words enhance this Sijo my friend.. now where is this beach? I am there luv..

Ellen Fahey

Date: 3/18/2011 4:04:00 PM

Goosebumps!! Loved it!! Good luck! Ellen

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/18/2011 2:11:00 PM

Definitely indefinable magical and flowing this piece from you Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2011 2:09:00 PM

Good luck with this very romantic work...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/18/2011 1:11:00 PM

Nice amalgamation of the feelings of love, Andrea

Jack Horne

Date: 3/18/2011 11:31:00 AM

That's beautiful, Andrea. So romantic! I imagined the plumber and his fiancee holding hands in the flooded hall when I saw the pic of Linda-Marie and her husband paddling in the sea LOL

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2011 10:34:00 AM

Very creative imagery, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/18/2011 10:15:00 AM

smackaroos, dear girl! seems you're passionate slip is showing!! whooting and winning... now, who can top this?? lovely piece :) huggs, nette