Sam Kauffman Poet Haiku

Twilight Kisses El

Twilight Kisses EL

Twilight blows burnished kisses
Still waters smile sunset bliss
Meadows glow in mists of rose
Fireflies wake up from repose
Woodland eyes see pure delight
Borning stars enchant wane light
Twilight blows burnished kisses

7-7-21
Contest: Elemental - Required elements earth, sky, water
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Elemental Form: Seven lines, seven syllables each line
Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCA
First and last line repeat.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Paula Goldsmith August 1, 2021 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Love your line "Twilight blows burnished kisses." It Does. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Marilene Evans July 31, 2021 at 10:30 AM Beautiful, Sam! Congratulations. Imagery takes you there.

Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 6:26 AM Beautiful poetry, Sam. Great imagery! Congratulations on a fine win! Hugs Charlie

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:42 AM This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!

Krish Radhakrishna July 15, 2021 at 12:04 PM A brilliant write! the picture created is beautiful in each line! All the best in the contest! regards Krish Sam Kauffman July 22, 2021 at 9:28 AM Thank you so much Krish. It is a joy to share the sunset with a friend! There is something very special about that elusive moment just as the sun sets and the world is suspended in beauty! All the best. Blessings!

Gary Radice July 11, 2021 at 1:45 AM A great write Sam. I'm there in your poem and I'm totally chilled. Beautiful. Cheers - Gary Sam Kauffman July 22, 2021 at 9:30 AM Thank you for sharing in the beauty of this sunset Gary. Wonderful to share it with a friend! Much gratitude and many thanks for your lovely note. It is so appreciated! Cheers!

Juliet Ligon July 9, 2021 at 5:50 PM Lovely imagery. Sam Kauffman July 22, 2021 at 9:33 AM Juliet, thank you! I love that time of day when the sun sets and life takes a moment to look up and see glory! Blessings to you!

Regina Mcintosh July 8, 2021 at 5:22 PM Sparkles like clear, cool water... a sensational write. I love it so. God bless you always, Love, Gina Sam Kauffman July 22, 2021 at 9:36 AM Gina, your message and feedback is so so appreciated. Thank you many times over. It makes me happy to know we can share in the glory of God's gift at the end of the day. Take care my friend. Sending you blessings and a hug!

Vijay Pandit July 8, 2021 at 12:20 PM Images glow brilliantly in your splendid vocabulary, Sam. Much enjoyed the tone and flow of your poem. Sam Kauffman July 22, 2021 at 9:24 AM Vijay, much gratitude and many thanks for your lovely note from a master of imagery. So glad you enjoyed the sunset with me. That puts a :D on this face. Hope you are well. Blessings!

Rama Balasubramanian July 8, 2021 at 11:02 AM Simply awesome. Amazing beauty. Great imagery. Best I have seen so far in this form. Sam Kauffman July 22, 2021 at 9:20 AM Rama, thank you! Please excuse my delay in answering your gracious message. Am way behind - again! Thank you for your feedback. You always encourage me. Sending you blessings!

Smita Kulkarni July 7, 2021 at 1:29 PM Twilight kisses and woodland eyes!! So so beautiful Sam!! Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 3:54 PM Thank you so much Smita not only for your visit but for your lovely and gracious message! Twilight is truly a beautiful time of day. All the best to you.

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2021 at 12:27 PM wow, gorgeous imagery, Sam . One of my favorites in this form that I have seen so far. Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 1:25 PM Ahh...Thank you so much my friend. There is a moment just before the sun sets when the light is magical and casts a spell on the world! I love this moment and wanted to capture it in words. This "elemental" form seemed to be a perfect format. Here's to burnished sunsets! Hugs :D

Jan Allison July 7, 2021 at 11:50 AM such wonderful imagery i love the opening line, I am still struggling to write mine lol:-) hugs Jan xx Sam Kauffman July 7, 2021 at 1:20 PM Thank you so much Jan! I was hoping to catch that elusive moment of twilight just before nighfall. Thank you for your feedback. Makes my day! I know you will write something wonderful and creative! Sometimes it just takes a little while to get those creative juices flowing and get our muses out of the hammock - :s! Will be looking for your entry! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs :D