Sara Kendrick Poet Than-Bauk

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The Bible says to forgive and your sins will be forgiven you..How close have I come to really forgiving others?  I have just been giving this some thought lately..Sara

Twilight Is Near

Twilight is near
Come here, dear_touch
Feel tear that flows
Forgive, expose
Sin; propose faith
Disclose_forgive
Repair this soul
Sheol free me
Porthole open__

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: **Than-Bauk A Twilight
Written by :Sara Kendrick

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2012 at 5:33 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson April 18, 2012 at 11:33 AM Very unique. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Len Gasun April 18, 2012 at 9:29 AM I love this one, Sara. Thanks for sharing and have a grace-filled time always. Hugs, Leonora.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders April 16, 2012 at 4:14 PM Wow, yours is a creative entry! I love it. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Jack Horne April 16, 2012 at 1:46 PM lovely and thought provoking piece indeed, sara

Laila Andresen Mjelde April 16, 2012 at 12:00 PM Excellent enjoyed your poem Sara!! Good luck in the contest. xoxo - Laila ;o)