Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Than-Bauk

Twilight Flare

my twilight love
stars above flare
both of our hearts

true love began
more love than sky
will span twilight

night lives always
hearts ablaze share
love stays at dawn


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, April 10, 2012
for ** THAN-BAUK A TWILIGHT Contest (Nette Onclaud)

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Carma Sanderson May 26, 2012 at 9:06 PM "WOW, lovely written Rhonda Good Luck with your Win. Carma"

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2012 at 6:53 AM well crafted one. Great picture going with it. I know it will do well in the contest!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 11, 2012 at 10:13 AM You have given it a romantic look with this lovely write, jag

Chittaranjan Dey April 11, 2012 at 9:02 AM Beautiful and nice poem.

Jack Horne April 11, 2012 at 7:27 AM love this romantic than bauk, rhonda. many congrats on your wins

Nette Onclaud April 11, 2012 at 2:16 AM thanks for joining, rhonda.. so nice!.. kindly check rhyme pattern and syl count... i have placed an example on the contest page.. if you need to revise, just edit and update your poem... will do another blog on this later!:) huggs!

Kash Poet April 10, 2012 at 9:59 PM Excellent use of the form here Rhonda.Thanks for your inspiring comment at my page.