William Kelii Kekaula Poet Quintain (English)

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Twilight Descension

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Twilight Descension

Bats fickle genteel soles of twilight, as swart crown abandons an errant moon,
A moon burrowing framing a forest, while Cupid charioteers spark an archway,
Neath a sinking moon, buds blossom, awaken by galloping Cherubs all strewn,
Frogs echoes in a lagoon as twilight wanes, same as words said of Hemingway, 
Porpoises leap frantically in the ocean, while night drifts in dawns golden sleigh.

2019 December 27
*3rd Place*
Writing Prompt - English Quintain Imagery
~~Dear Heart: Judged 2020 January 10 

Rhyme Scheme; a,b,a,b,b

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Constance La France January 19, 2020 at 8:45 AM William, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this lovely poem (Love the image too) _Constance William Kelii Kekaula January 19, 2020 at 9:19 AM Thank you, Constance, for my placement as it was a joy to write this for your Contest~@wk

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 2:14 PM - A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise William Kelii Kekaula January 14, 2020 at 2:26 PM Thanks again my poetess friend~@wk

Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2020 at 4:59 AM Gorgeous imagery in this winning poem William. Congratulations! xxoo William Kelii Kekaula January 11, 2020 at 8:04 AM Mahalo Connie for your gracious words Aloha!~@wk

Beautiful Scars January 10, 2020 at 3:18 PM beautiful imagery and emotion dear William, congrats...may you have a great night x:-)-luloo PS Aloha to you too :) William Kelii Kekaula January 10, 2020 at 4:16 PM My heartfelt thanks all around and likewise, my compliments on your big win, deservingly so and Aloha~@wk

Eve Roper December 27, 2019 at 10:49 AM this is so beautiful, William, living in island really brings out beautiful verse of the landscape. good luck in the contest. and I still have your prize I will never spend it...I am a luck lady William Kelii Kekaula December 27, 2019 at 12:15 PM With extended courtesies for your gracious thoughts, --luck be a lady..., indeed ~ Aloha always William