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*Image of Twilight Descension Bats fickle genteel soles of twilight, as swart crown abandons an errant moon, A moon burrowing framing a forest, while Cupid charioteers spark an archway, Neath a sinking moon, buds blossom, awaken by galloping Cherubs all strewn, Frogs echoes in a lagoon as twilight wanes, same as words said of Hemingway, Porpoises leap frantically in the ocean, while night drifts in dawns golden sleigh. 2019 December 27 *3rd Place* Writing Prompt - English Quintain Imagery ~~Dear Heart: Judged 2020 January 10 Rhyme Scheme; a,b,a,b,b

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Date: 1/19/2020 8:45:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this lovely poem (Love the image too) _Constance
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Date: 1/19/2020 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, for my placement as it was a joy to write this for your Contest~@wk
Date: 1/14/2020 2:14:00 PM
- A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/14/2020 2:26:00 PM
Thanks again my poetess friend~@wk
Date: 1/11/2020 4:59:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery in this winning poem William. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2020 8:04:00 AM
Mahalo Connie for your gracious words Aloha!~@wk
Date: 1/10/2020 3:18:00 PM
beautiful imagery and emotion dear William, congrats...may you have a great night x:-)-luloo PS Aloha to you too :)
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Date: 1/10/2020 4:16:00 PM
My heartfelt thanks all around and likewise, my compliments on your big win, deservingly so and Aloha~@wk
Date: 12/27/2019 10:49:00 AM
this is so beautiful, William, living in island really brings out beautiful verse of the landscape. good luck in the contest. and I still have your prize I will never spend it...I am a luck lady
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Date: 12/27/2019 12:15:00 PM
With extended courtesies for your gracious thoughts, --luck be a lady..., indeed ~ Aloha always William

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