Twilight Child

~*~ Perched on the porch steps, as the crimson sun goes down I am sipping on my cold iced tea, and drinking up the joy I am smiling as I’m watching him, as the weary day retreats… While the shadows of the trees and poles are stretching long and narrow He is running swiftly in the yard, in the warmth of summer breezes His arms are opened vast and wide, while he races through the trees I see him weaving figure eights, he is flying like a sparrow While he studies how his shadow moves, as swiftly as an arrow He is laughing at his mirrored twin, a silhouetted super hero Now he’s jumping over power lines, finely etched upon the grass Reflections from the poles above, in the magic of the dusk The joy lights up his face with wonder, a new power of discovery! It seems if he could tightrope walk, those lines into the sky His shirt billows out, like hero’s cape, his glee is free and wild Oh, joyful moments watching him! … my precious twilight child !
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Inspired by Rick's Contest "Shadows and Lines"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Shadows and Lines" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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June 26, 2011 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations Carrie! on the win in this contest..with this sunny & livley piece
Devonshire Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your big win, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:45 AM
Congrats Carrie on your win..this goes to my Favs.
Well Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:49 AM
wow! awesome creation! congratulations on this well deserved win!
Well Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 5:34 AM
wow! awesome creation! congratulations on this well deserved win!
Onclaud Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:36 AM
incredible, carrie... … raving KUDOS to you for the special top win :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 10:18 PM
Beathtakingly beautiful what you came up with for this contest. A huge congrats to you!
Macmillan Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 6:17 PM
How the heck did I miss reading this earlier? WOW! Deserves the first place! Wonderful, unique perspective, refreshing take on this contest and just tickles at the heart strings! Way to go, Carrie! Lucky mom and lucky son :-) smiles from Cyndi
Muzzey Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this awesome write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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June 22, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Congrats - told you it was a good one !
Sweetheart Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in shadows and lines contest with this lovely entry so creative ... enjoy top billing once again luv..
Bagnall Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:44 AM
That is a lovely moment you've manages to capture. I'm honoured to be able to so vividly share that memory with you. It's lovely. Really enjoyed.
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:30 PM
so charming and so lucky to have the joy of grandchildren! Light & Love to you always!
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June 17, 2011 at 3:14 PM
Excellent Poetry Carrie, should place well high on the list of winners...always with Love Michael
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