Twilight

T ime of day I like best. W hen birds are settling down to rest. I walk along the water's edge. L et summer breeze my face caress. I nvariably I am alone. G one are locals and tourists home. H ave even sneaked a skinny swim. T hese times my soul is one with Him.

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 9/26/2016 4:29:00 PM

Wonderful poem JEAN, I could see and feel the scene you depicted so well. Loved it.

Jean Murray
Date: 9/26/2016 5:42:00 PM

The beach is Rathmullan, about 15 minutes drive. The closest to Letterkenny. Having grown up in a village by the sea, it's nice to still be not too far from the ocean I grew up with. At the far end, I can ensure no one will arrive upon me unexpectedly.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/24/2016 9:11:00 AM

Lovely poem, Jean. I would have loved to be one of those nesting birds close by, while you were sneaking your skinny swim:):)

Jean Murray
Date: 9/24/2016 12:03:00 PM

A bird's eye view? Lucky you!

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 9/24/2016 6:30:00 AM

Great poem well done writing it x

Jean Murray
Date: 9/24/2016 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Wendy.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/24/2016 6:08:00 AM

Beautiful ...

Jean Murray
Date: 9/24/2016 6:17:00 AM

And you are beautiful to encourage me with such positive comments Probir. I am still only learning, having joined Poetrysoup just over a year. Writing brings me such joy.