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Twilight

Twilight, with its soft light,
    Its faint quiet shadows,
Falling on the hillsides,
    The mountains, the meadows,
Brings to me such deep thoughts,
    Such philosophic notions,
That I sometimes imagine
    At daylight's cessation
What I would see 
    If I saw with God’s eye.

See all the atoms 
    And see all the stars,
See all the peasants
    And see all the Tsars.
See all the peoples
    Who live on the Earth.
See their life as remembered  
    From their moment of birth;
All the small memories
    That make up their past:
Their teacher at her desk
    In ninth-grade French class;
The sun on the leaves
    That they saw as a child;
The wind in the trees;
    That day a son smiled.

Memories no one but they
    Can ever experience,
As we’re locked inside skulls
    And mostly oblivious
To the vast inner lives  
    Of each one around us.
  
So as day draws to night
    And the sunlight fades,
As I drift through my daydream
    And wander through glades,
I imagine my life
    Multiplied by the billions
If I could see even dimly
    By a god’s holy vision,
And then by more billions  
    By all those who’ve died;
The immense web of memories
    That surround us but reside
Always and forever 
    Just out of reach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/15/2016 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations Jerome
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 12/16/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 9/25/2016 3:08:00 PM
Many congrats Jermome:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:28:00 AM
Jerome-lovely poem on twilight...congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/25/2016 7:54:00 AM
A wonderful thought brought out by your lovely poem, Jerome:) congratulations on your great win in the twilight contest:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 3:13:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem, Jerome. I like how you span the arc from the small to the large and how you weave the philosophical musings seemlessly into the poem. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 9/25/2016 7:36:00 PM
Thanks. This is something that I wrote before the contest was announced, with the idea to use twilight and its description to lead into the main theme, trying however imperfectly to do something in the style of Wordsworth.
Date: 9/24/2016 9:49:00 PM
My favorite poem in the contest. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 9/24/2016 11:03:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/24/2016 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations Jerome on your first place write. It would be great to see the beauty of the world from heaven. What a wonderful concept:)
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 9/24/2016 11:03:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 9/24/2016 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations Jerome on the first placement of the contest.
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Jerome Malenfant
Date: 9/24/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thanks.

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