Twilight

twilight fondles eyes

lifting her silhouette high

against lucid clouds--

flesh undressed beneath torn trees

drowning in pools of farewell



Tanka Written With  A Decent Pivot
For 	Chris D. Aechtner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Maverick Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Congrats on the win here Gabby, this speaks to me of the inadaquacy of people aimdst the endlessness and at times almost overpowening presence of the temporal world..
A  Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 6:05 PM
HI GABBY, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
Green Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 1:50 PM
You still surprise me with your sweet and tender writing. Great job my friend! congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:30 PM
wow, amazing imagery!! Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Way to go with this one..Congrats.Sara
Walker  Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Nice Gabby... Congratulations on your win. Verlena
Celestial Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 8:17 AM
The best thoughts are within this poem Gabby!
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