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Twilight

Twilight
Twilight is a time of intermingling dark and light It is an internecine drama beyond the reach of Fellini’s lens or Picasso’s brush or Shakespeare’s flight It is a time that opens perception inviting thereof To see not in spite of the darkness but because its whereof. It’s twilight now and the light is fading touching the sky Scarlet red wishing it orange the gentle blue fading It’s twilight again and the darkness on the horizon spy The night is slowly edging Ready to take its place on the light it’s pouncing. The sun is hanging between this world and the next, Waiting for the last bit of gray to settle in, Waiting to fall away in to another time and place complex, Leaving the past in its fading rays therein, Leaving the present to face the future within.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date: 29-1-14 Form: Quintain Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win Contest: Impress Me by Giorgio V. Motif 7- Nature

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Date: 1/31/2014 10:07:00 PM
This poem is a beautifully painted piece of art! I love the nighttime, and I enjoyed this poem just as much! Wonderful work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for all of the kind comments. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:29:00 PM
Dr. the poem is beautiful....SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:01:00 PM
Dr. Ram wonderful use of color to paint this picture of a poem. Enjoyed the last verse most of all.
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:28:00 PM
- Nice to read your beautiful poem, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2014 5:41:00 PM
"Fellini’s lens or Picasso’s brush or Shakespeare’s flight" Loved that line. Well written quintain, cheers.
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Date: 1/28/2014 1:17:00 PM
hi Ram great description of twilight super write Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/28/2014 5:26:00 AM
There is magic and beauty in twilight....what an enchanting time that you capture with this lovely write of yours, Dr Ram. :)
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