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Twilight

TWILIGHT When the twilight of your years is here And the sky is only starlit Think only this of one who loved you dear How many times I used to sit And read you tales of times gone by Or show you clouds as dale and hill The limit was beyond the sky The empty void was yours to fill Did you fill it with all your heart And not regret the chance you took? If you did, though heaven falls apart, Life’s evening closes not the book.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/10/2012 8:42:00 AM
KC!...my heart skips.., the imagery is amazing and flowing..i was looking for something to highlight but cannot find one thing that falls short of another... this is perfectly conducted; it carries a clear scene with a natural float of romance.. a good pieceto read aloud. and of course, great write... come visit my " ancient place" and grill it, lol. :) huggs!
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:02:00 AM
this is the kind of poetry I try to write, Sydney, using simple but beautifully elegant liines to capture your emotion or a meaningful idea. You outdid yourself here. a FAVE
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