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black clouds threaten in rumbling roars and thunderous waves across the hills life unrolls the worst it has to offer and in our innocence we wonder what has made the gods so angry that our illusions so easily be crushed dreams extinguished as castles crumble grown men falling to their knees cursing both sun and moon above and again we ask what has made the gods so angry AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Submitted on June 19, 2023 for A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE NO 1224 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Date: 6/21/2023 6:45:00 PM
The elusive 'Why' of it all -- more slippery than ever each century...
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Date: 6/22/2023 7:06:00 AM
absolutely ~

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