Anonomus Scorpio Poet Rhyme

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Twice again

The day you meet; she'll count them once, then twice again
Her love was formed; long before, their formation did begin
On the hands and feet, she sees Perfect 10 after Perfect ten
Mistakes you'll both make; but she will be there again and again
No one gentler will there be; to touch your cheeks, nose, or chin. 
Unconditionally, understood; no one else will know you as deeply within
For deep inside her heart; is the place where your very soul, did begin

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Paige Hind November 24, 2023 at 5:58 PM "For deep inside her heart; is the place where your very soul, did begin" what a lovely and unique way of looking at mothers! Enjoyed this! Anonomus Scorpio November 25, 2023 at 12:45 AM I find as I get older, recognizing and owning the fact that I have a atrocious relationship with my own mother, I truly appreciate seeing all of the good mothers that are in my life. A.S.

Daniel Turner November 23, 2023 at 6:26 PM Nothing like a loving mother:) Very nice, AS. Anonomus Scorpio November 24, 2023 at 1:02 AM They are few and far in between my friend, I wish I could say I was writing this to my own mother, but unfortunately it's written to the good Mothers I know that aren't mine. A.S.