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Twentynet-70

Blaring disco swirling clubs ‘One night affair’ shakes Funk, Latin, Soul music reverberated vocals grinding hips shaking bosoms electric pianos phenomenon spread, over and above all young minds, young bodies, a fusion trippy lighting colourful costume remix version, DJs influential, people party Shake, shake, shake, shake your booty All is free, don’t be snooty Disco wear, stretch and reflect light Ultra violet light zooms Heady time, heady music Soled shoes Feet hurt By-Tahera Mannan For Nette’s ‘Magic for decade’s mood’ Contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/2/2011 5:11:00 PM

wow I had a flash back of John travolta & that gal chair dancing getting splashed with water! GOOD one dear! Congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 7:56:00 PM

hahaha,I love the way you personalized it at the end with your hurt feet. No wonder, from all that great dancing. Cool poem. cool win. Congratuations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/31/2011 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Tahera. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/30/2011 5:23:00 AM

Tahera, it is good to see you made the top three. Smile. Congratulations on your poem's honored placement. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/29/2011 12:38:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your win ...this is a wonderful write...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/29/2011 8:23:00 AM

Congrats Tahera on your super win in Nette's contest with this superb entry my friend.. enjoy that top spot for excellence once again luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/29/2011 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Tahera

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/2/2011 8:14:00 AM

Superbly done the 70's here Tahera, loved how you so nicely captured that feel ..the lines are brilliant.. heady time, heady music..young minds , bodies fusion...Good luck, luv gautami

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/2/2011 3:44:00 AM

Tahera- I forgot to tell u how much I too enjoyed this poem succinctly ending with YOUR FEET IN PAIN! Marvelous full circle ending. gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2011 9:41:00 PM

Wow,you made it completely disco. were you a disco queen, sweetie? I love that last line how you ended with feet hurt! awesome!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/1/2011 5:35:00 AM

I know nothing about it except what I see in the movies. Very rhythmic and set my inner self dancing, Tahera

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2011 11:45:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this creative work..Sad that the feet hurt..Probably wrong kind of shoes that look really great on the feet but are terrible to wear..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I added a note on it..Sara

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/30/2011 6:25:00 AM

You make me wanna go roller skating with this 70's write. Great word choices of the 70's. U focused on the positives, for sure! Gwendolen

Fabiyas M V

Date: 4/30/2011 1:53:00 AM

It's a magic with words,Tahera.Beautiful entry for the contest.Thanks for all support.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2011 1:25:00 PM

Wow Tahera my friend u captured the essence of the decate in this Twentynet 70's contest entry.. luv the clubs and music treats u wrote .. the disco was cool too.. good luck in the contest with this magnificent entry luv ..happy weekend...