Twenty Years

Twenty years in which to learn 
Lessons great in value
Twenty years to be aware
Of what is real or untrue
 
All this time; I wonder if
I've spent it well enough
And what have I to show for it…
Is it merely piles of stuff?
 
Or something one can't easily grasp
Such as the love we covet
Given freely to someone
No misgivings or regret
 
By what scale, then, should we measure
The thing we call success?
I think it should be measured by
The people we have blessed
 
And how we've shown to those behind
The way to live a life
With grace and kind abidance 
Through the times of trial and strife




©Donna Golden
June, 2005 (Written just before my 20 year high school reunion!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Donna. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Congrats Donna on your poem being featured. Hope all is well. Vince
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January 5, 2009 at 10:56 PM
You could still be 20... don't worry, I won't ask! K.
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January 5, 2009 at 10:38 PM
...definitely worth a second look! K.
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January 5, 2009 at 10:37 PM
Such a beautiful message! You are wise beyond your years... perfect cadence and rhyming. Keep writing! God bless, Keith
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December 20, 2008 at 11:08 PM
You write with great wisdom and insight... lovely cadence and rhyming, and a sublime message! Best wishes, Keith
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