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Twenty Twenty

He skated along road little used, except by butterflies - he chased. On his scooter, he raced. Suddenly halting, “Aww…he flied away!”

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Deb M

Date: 9/14/2023 10:15:00 PM

The innocence of a sweet child is a such a wonderful thing and you captured it beautifully here Kim….Lovely…..Debx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2023 8:08:00 AM

Thank you, Deb!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 1:40:00 AM

A lovely scene seen through a child's eyes:) that last line is so endearing, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 4:03:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2023 8:44:00 PM

Ah, 'he' may have missed that butterfly, but you sure captured 'him!' Excelsior!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 4:03:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/13/2023 8:26:00 PM

A child at heart. I am as well. I enjoy reading, blessing, my friend

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 4:03:00 AM

:) Hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/13/2023 6:49:00 PM

so cute penning, bravo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 4:02:00 AM

Thank you, Yann!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/13/2023 5:57:00 PM

So cute. Thank you for sharing this youthful perspective.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2023 6:32:00 PM

Thank you, Jerry!

Paige Hind

Date: 9/13/2023 2:24:00 PM

I liked the childish feel of this poem. Little kids, I remember being one... :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2023 2:35:00 PM

So long ago for me but living precariously through the grands.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/13/2023 9:50:00 AM

this is charming, kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene! :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/13/2023 5:53:00 AM

I love short poems. There a pleasure to read and can capture so much in a little space. You're very good at this.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2023 2:36:00 PM

Me too! Thank you, Duke!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2023 5:31:00 AM

- A fun race :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2023 5:47:00 AM

It was indeed a cute moment we caught on video :)