Twenty Twenty

He skated along
road little used,
except by butterflies -
he chased.
On his scooter, he raced.
Suddenly halting,
“Aww…he flied away!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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M  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:15 PM
The innocence of a sweet child is a such a wonderful thing and you captured it beautifully here Kim….Lovely…..Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 1:40 AM
A lovely scene seen through a child's eyes:) that last line is so endearing, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Thank you, Joanna! :)
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Ah, 'he' may have missed that butterfly, but you sure captured 'him!' Excelsior!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Roper Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 8:26 PM
A child at heart. I am as well. I enjoy reading, blessing, my friend
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:03 AM
:) Hugs
Rolland Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 6:49 PM
so cute penning, bravo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:02 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Brotherton Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:57 PM
So cute. Thank you for sharing this youthful perspective.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Jerry!
Hind Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:24 PM
I liked the childish feel of this poem. Little kids, I remember being one... :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:35 PM
So long ago for me but living precariously through the grands.
Bauer Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 9:50 AM
this is charming, kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:35 PM
Thank you, Ilene! :)
Beaufort Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:53 AM
I love short poems. There a pleasure to read and can capture so much in a little space. You're very good at this.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Me too! Thank you, Duke!
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:31 AM
- A fun race :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:47 AM
It was indeed a cute moment we caught on video :)
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