Twenty One Years

twenty one years ago
a great day I did know
you were born into this world
my little bundle of Joy
tiny little fingers and toes a tiny little boy
you grew up quite charming and quite handsome too
and there was choices you made that you didn't really want to do
but son always know that I always will Love you
money and matereal things are no importance to me
so please just be happy and be who you were meant to be
I will always help you if you get stuck
I'LL help you clean up if you fall in the muck
 a mother will always do for her kids the best that  she can do
no matter what you did I still love you.
if you need any help at all
just pick up that phone and give us a call.
I will always be there no matter what.

happy birthday Robert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/11/2009 3:45:00 AM
Beautiful poem celibrating your sons 21st, so touching and loving>James
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Date: 6/2/2009 8:22:00 AM
It's beautiful Diane, really it is. 21 years pass like 21 minutes... I know how time vanishes, but it does not take memories with it... we cherish in later years, no matter what. You rock! Love, Amaan!
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Date: 5/26/2009 11:40:00 AM
Great tribute to your son. I like this piece. ~Des Juan
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Date: 5/20/2009 11:58:00 AM
YOU ARE BLESSED AND FELT I DONT HAVE CHILDREN BUT I KNOW THE JOY THEY BRING THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS AND I LOOK FORWARD TO MANY MORE OF YOUR GREAT WRITINGS TO COME
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:03:00 AM
This is what makes mothers great, it makes you great. One love.
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:46:00 PM
A well written poem from the heart of a loving momther. Happy Mother's Day Diane. MOre success and God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 5/8/2009 2:18:00 PM
i take these words as if they come from my own mother. and i thank you. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:43:00 PM
so sweet...he's a lucky boy.
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:39:00 PM
Aw, this is so beautiful. My son will be 22 next month and I know the bond of mother and son is so powerful. As a matter of fact my son is on his way home from college for the weekend as I write this. A powerful testament of your devotion and love. He is lucky to have you. Love, Shar
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