Twenty Minutes of Turbulence

TWENTY MINUTES OF TURBULENCE

seat belts fastened
tight

snack carts
jettisoned away

pilot on the talkie
nonsensical i say

the mobster clouds
take our jumbo jet

for a ride
we fly the turbulent skies

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 4, 2017 at 10:02 AM
So those mobster clouds put a contract out on your plane? Nice one Kim. This one soars.........
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April 4, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Thanks...lol!
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April 4, 2017 at 8:39 AM
I'm afraid to say you took me in a fun ride in this fast-paced highjacking like turbulence. Amazingly well done :) 7
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April 4, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Thank you, Anne-Marie!
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April 4, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Does not sound like fun! Amazingly descriptive in so few words. Great write, Kim. Blessings, Kim M.
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April 4, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Kim! :)
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