Twelve Things I Would Teach My Children

Children, our most treasured wealth shouldn’t grow maimed
In joyful living and the art of life, they need to be groomed

At a young age when they are flexible and pliable
A mother’s gentle guidance will help them not to stumble 
 
I feel I should extend my guiding hand to teach 
How to live happy and attain the stature they should reach

I would teach my children a dozen and more values
To be fair and just in all they do and shine in life like jewels 

I insist, from the right path they should never waver
Also, to speak out their mind without fear or favor

They should learn to love their body with all its flaws
Keeping fit, but knowing it is internal beauty that glows

Train them to ensure personal hygiene, keep things tidy
Follow a system, be punctual and in decisions, be steady 

Inculcate in them a love for their parents, siblings, and the family
Treating all men with respect and love, facing criticism calmly

Make them diligent in their study, dutiful and punctilious
Braving life with its ups and downs, springing back with resilience

Train them to accept that life offers a mixed pack of joy and grief
And hardly there is time to waste in lamentation, as life is brief

Train them to be vigilant not to fall in traps set by predators
As, in our world, there are masked assassins and imposters

Above all, make them love God, giving the reins of life to His hands
Knowing things are never in man’s control, but everything works as He plans

Feb.14.2023

12 Things You’d Teach Your Child
Sponsor- Matt Caliri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/15/2023 6:39:00 PM
Teach them about G-d, and everything else will fall into place. :) gw
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Date: 2/15/2023 5:06:00 PM
wow, Valsa, I think you hit just about every single thing!!
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Date: 2/15/2023 12:07:00 AM
Great advice, Valsa:) all the best:)
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Date: 2/14/2023 7:17:00 PM
Great words from. Mama’s lips!
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Date: 2/14/2023 12:13:00 PM
Great words of advice throughout, Valsa. Every couplet thrives in ideal environment-- teaching right from wrong. You convey to the reader every parent's aspirations in this poem.
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Date: 2/14/2023 11:00:00 AM
Love this , very great wisdom and knowledge for all, : )
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Date: 2/14/2023 8:49:00 AM
Why do parents not teach their children the right things to do and behave? Great suggestions, dear Valsa. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/14/2023 8:16:00 AM
Valsa, this is an absolutely amazing piece of art that is a joy to read and provides a lot of satisfaction. The fantastic language and analogies that you use in your work bring out its inherent beauty and make it even more impressive. There's no need to tell that you're a fantastic mother since this is a guide for all parents. Win big
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Date: 2/14/2023 7:39:00 AM
This should be a guide for all parents Valsa, goes without saying you're an excellent mom. Good luck. Tom
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