Tweety

This is the story of Tweety
 who flew in our window one day.
I felt I couldn't keep him
 so I gave Tweety away.

I gave him to my next door neighbor
 and she had a bird of her own
so she put them in her cage together
 so they would not be alone.

They got along fine for a short time
 then Tweety began to attack!
Shortly thereafter my neighbor
 asked me to take Tweety back!

At first I was a little reluctant
 but I didn't want her bird to die
so I told her to bring Tweety over
 at least I was willing to try.

He sure was a vicious wee bugger
 for something so fragile and small
and I have to admit from the onset
 I didn't like Tweety at all.

He looked so sweet and so cuddly
 with feathers of soft blue and white
but looks can be so deceiving 
'cause boy that Tweety could bite!

But soon he started to mellow,
 I whistled and he'd whistle back.
The more attention I gave him
 the less he was prone to attack.
 
He flew round the room on occasion
 and would land on our chandelier.
He'd walk all over my shoulders
 and occasionally nibble my ear.

I'll admit that he won me over
 which I never thought he would do.
He's considered a part of the family
 and we all love him it's true!

We've welcomed him into our hearts now
 and hope that he has a long stay.
So that's the story of Tweety
 who flew in our window one day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Harrington Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Good one! Congrats on your win! :) Tanya
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 10:48 AM
this is really a cool poem. Great name he had. He then turned into a Tweetie pie, when he mellowed out!!
Eastman Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Wonderful! Congratulations on the win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Big Congratulations on joint top spot Ralph xx
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 3:17 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem - thanks for the nice contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 8:46 PM
Ralph, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING pet poem.. always~LINDA
Johnson Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 7:44 PM
Great story Ralph. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
A  Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:59 PM
thanks 4 the support~LUV~SKAT
Mister Roboto Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 11:28 PM
I love this type of poetry! My stuff is so opposite. This gives me a nice refreshing lift before I go back to my deviant works! ~JS Lambert
Brown Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest ~Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting Contest~ sponsored by ~A Rambling Poet~ Ralph. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 9:09 PM
wow, this is a great one about a mere bird. And how you softened his heart . Inspiring and I'm so glad you made the list. LUv, Andrea
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March 13, 2010 at 3:32 AM
Congratulations Ralph, on your cheery win in The Rambling Poet’s “Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting” contest. I must say, it is a delightful read and a wonderful way to start the day. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 6:19 PM
A big congrats Ralph on your winning poem and placement in the Pet contest.. a sweet write ..a wonderful win for u to so enjoy as I have reading it...thankxxx so much for your special comments today on my poetry reading.. so appreciate ..luv.."Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 5:44 PM
And a lovely story it is. Loved it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:45 PM
So good, good person, good bird good ending! Light & love
Palli Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 12:23 AM
such a fun poem, i really enjoyed it
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