Turtle Time

Turtle Time


Ever wonder what they think?
You know, the turtles.
The throwbacks, the procrastinators,

“Land—water—both?”
The first houseboats,
heads sitting on the bow

guiding the cumbersome craft,
stalking the unsuspecting
in slow-mo silence.

Mud slide building
sun worshippers
living life in the slow lane.

Old folk
at warm water beaches
reminiscing,

long swims, ocean currents,
mounded sand,
moonlight rendezvous.

Solitary creatures,
hard shelled
evolutionary slowpokes.

Ever wonder what they think
as generations pass?

John G. Lawless
7/15/2014
contest – Hard Shells – turtle inspired free verse
sponsor – Cyndi MacMillan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Great write, John. Wonderful imagery. Congratulations!
Jerden Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Interesting analogy, John... Excellent! Well, done. Congratulations on your placement!
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Yours truly was one of the very best in the contest. So glad to see this do well. BIG congrats to you.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Big congrats on ur great win on this splendid write John!
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Thank you for you support Dr. Upma
Chutani Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 3:09 AM
John, fine description of turtles in free sweet flow. Congrats for fine top placement. Mohan
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Mohan
Trichet Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Yeh! great spin on the contest John. Loved your angle, well done.
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Mark - I enjoyed your list topper.
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Ahh! For the life of a turtle!.. Gl in the contest my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Lawless Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Arlene, it has been said that the turtle gets nowhere without sticking his neck out. thanks for checking in.
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 3:45 PM
wow, I LOVE the way you compared them to sun worshipers and the slowed down generation. This is really good. I love the way you presented your idea for this contest. VErY clever!!
Lawless Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 9:14 PM
Hey, Andrea, never count the turtle out of the race. Thanks for your support.
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