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Turtle Time

Turtle Time Ever wonder what they think? You know, the turtles. The throwbacks, the procrastinators, “Land—water—both?” The first houseboats, heads sitting on the bow guiding the cumbersome craft, stalking the unsuspecting in slow-mo silence. Mud slide building sun worshippers living life in the slow lane. Old folk at warm water beaches reminiscing, long swims, ocean currents, mounded sand, moonlight rendezvous. Solitary creatures, hard shelled evolutionary slowpokes. Ever wonder what they think as generations pass? John G. Lawless 7/15/2014 contest – Hard Shells – turtle inspired free verse sponsor – Cyndi MacMillan

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Date: 8/8/2014 12:53:00 PM
Great write, John. Wonderful imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/8/2014 9:40:00 AM
Interesting analogy, John... Excellent! Well, done. Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:10:00 PM
Yours truly was one of the very best in the contest. So glad to see this do well. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 8/7/2014 5:41:00 AM
Big congrats on ur great win on this splendid write John!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:43:00 AM
Thank you for you support Dr. Upma
Date: 8/7/2014 3:09:00 AM
John, fine description of turtles in free sweet flow. Congrats for fine top placement. Mohan
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Mohan
Date: 8/7/2014 2:06:00 AM
Yeh! great spin on the contest John. Loved your angle, well done.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/7/2014 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Mark - I enjoyed your list topper.
Date: 7/24/2014 8:18:00 AM
Ahh! For the life of a turtle!.. Gl in the contest my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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John Lawless
Date: 7/24/2014 9:16:00 PM
Arlene, it has been said that the turtle gets nowhere without sticking his neck out. thanks for checking in.
Date: 7/15/2014 3:45:00 PM
wow, I LOVE the way you compared them to sun worshipers and the slowed down generation. This is really good. I love the way you presented your idea for this contest. VErY clever!!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/24/2014 9:14:00 PM
Hey, Andrea, never count the turtle out of the race. Thanks for your support.

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