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Turtle On the Green Grass

How lovely is this turtle! So peaceful! His course is well designed by nature's whim He crawls, like a green creeper, so blissful He can walk and skulk and easily swim His course is well designed by nature's whim He's not sure of his life's next stride or stage He can walk and skulk and easily swim He seems calm, content like a saintly sage He's not sure of his life's next stride or stage He crawls, like a green creeper, so blissful He seems calm, content like a saintly sage How lovely is this turtle! So peaceful! 28 May 2021 #4 Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 7/17/2021 12:21:00 PM
Splendidly done dear Chris, congrats on your first place win !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/16/2022 12:58:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/27/2021 9:40:00 AM
Christuraj, this is a lovely pantoum, a rather difficult poem... like working a puzzle. You have deserved this fine win. Congratulations! Carol Louise
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/16/2022 12:58:00 AM
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Date: 6/25/2021 11:13:00 AM
Such a fun tribute to one of God's terrific creatures. Well done! Congratulations on your win!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/26/2021 4:48:00 AM
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Date: 6/24/2021 7:09:00 PM
Wow! congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent, and writing about the turtle in your awesome poetic style is a proof. God bless you.
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Date: 6/25/2021 12:53:00 AM
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Date: 6/24/2021 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Christuraj. <3 Eve
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/25/2021 12:53:00 AM
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Date: 6/24/2021 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a cute write with this peaceful turtle. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/25/2021 12:52:00 AM
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:53:00 AM
Nicely done, Christuraj, the sound is poetically rhythmic using simple words offering a striking image. My compliments on your win my friend, Aloha!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/24/2021 12:18:00 PM
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Date: 5/31/2021 2:04:00 AM
aww I love turtles, nice poem of a very remarkable lovely creature Christuraj!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/31/2021 4:37:00 AM
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Date: 5/29/2021 11:57:00 AM
A truly endearing pantoum, Christuraj. Superb observation immortalized in rhyme.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/29/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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