Christuraj Alex Poet Pantoum

Turtle On the Green Grass

How lovely is this turtle! So peaceful!
His course is well designed by nature's whim
He crawls, like a green creeper, so blissful
He can walk and skulk and easily swim

His course is well designed by nature's whim
He's not sure of his life's next stride or stage
He can walk and skulk and easily swim
He seems calm, content like a saintly sage

He's not sure of his life's next stride or stage
He crawls, like a green creeper, so blissful
He seems calm, content like a saintly sage
How lovely is this turtle! So peaceful!


28 May 2021
#4
Pantoum Rhyme Poetry Contest
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Mystic Rose Rose July 17, 2021 at 12:21 PM Splendidly done dear Chris, congrats on your first place win ! Christuraj Alex January 16, 2022 at 12:58 AM Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman June 25, 2021 at 11:13 AM Such a fun tribute to one of God's terrific creatures. Well done! Congratulations on your win! Christuraj Alex June 26, 2021 at 4:48 AM Thank you very much.

Beata Agustin June 24, 2021 at 7:09 PM Wow! congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent, and writing about the turtle in your awesome poetic style is a proof. God bless you. Christuraj Alex June 25, 2021 at 12:53 AM Thank you very much.

Eve Roper June 24, 2021 at 1:41 PM Congratulations on your win, Christuraj. <3 Eve Christuraj Alex June 25, 2021 at 12:53 AM Thank you very much.

Paula Goldsmith June 24, 2021 at 12:24 PM Congratulations on your win. What a cute write with this peaceful turtle. Enjoy your win with blessings.................... Christuraj Alex June 25, 2021 at 12:52 AM Thank you very much.

William Kelii Kekaula June 24, 2021 at 11:53 AM Nicely done, Christuraj, the sound is poetically rhythmic using simple words offering a striking image. My compliments on your win my friend, Aloha! Christuraj Alex June 24, 2021 at 12:18 PM Thank you very much.

Paris-Maree Boreham May 31, 2021 at 2:04 AM aww I love turtles, nice poem of a very remarkable lovely creature Christuraj! Christuraj Alex May 31, 2021 at 4:37 AM Thank you very much.

L Milton Hankins May 29, 2021 at 11:57 AM A truly endearing pantoum, Christuraj. Superb observation immortalized in rhyme. Christuraj Alex May 29, 2021 at 1:13 PM Thank you very much.