Turtle Fight

My turtle got into a fight with a snail
Unfortunately he did not prevail
He couldn't last
The snail was too fast
The turtle was doomed to fail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Laurie Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:10 PM
G'day Timothy … you would have got your money's worth watching this. Enjoyed - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Lindsay
Awtry Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 12:16 AM
no need for instant replay as it was all in slow motion :)
Mcguire Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Not for the turtle :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 7:50 PM
LOL that is one blockbuster fight I would buy a ticket for, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 8:02 PM
A three minute round took an hour
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