Turret

I see you set sail amidst the lucid sky,
finally free after saving me
Braving the stench-filled moat
as if you were crossing a lavender field

I tried to reach you, 
but my fingers only touch crepuscular rays,
as my dream crumbles back to reality

There you are
 Still

-blending in the shadows
futilely fighting your own dragons
building your fort with fire and ire
layering your defenses, brick by brick 

Still towering
 yet forever shackled

I tried to break through you,
 but I was the one that got shattered; 
          The only one 
to realize
    that we were never made of stone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 11:47 PM
Here to say I miss you here
Onclaud Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 4:02 PM
nikks, you are back! what a poetic experience, the things that have stuck to the soul in the form of unheard pining. outstanding, arresting work indelibly marked! galing as always...huggs
Cornish Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Dearest Nikko!! 'Tis you! I'm honored, especially honored cuz the last poem you wrote (7 years ago) was for another of my contests (The Grist Mill) and it was also a top 3 winner as well! BTW, what do they feed you gals on the islands - must be inspirational juice...so very glad this rattled your cage!
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 4:48 PM
Amazing. What day did this post? I see it was during this year. A fave . It would be so cool if it appeared on the best new 100 poems list
Cornish Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:11 AM
I certainly did!
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Good grief. He didn't even place YOURS? You are like a free verse princess.
K. Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:11 AM
Hi sweetie! Thank you for dropping by :) Sorry I'm really a mushroom here, I posted this just this month for Craig's contest... Thank you for faving this, that means a lot to me :) I highly doubt it would make it to that list, but I am happy just to be able to eke out something pretty decent. Sure seems so quiet here, understandable though since I haven't been active ;)
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