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Turquoise Sea, Coconut Trees and Turtles

Turquoise Sea, Coconut Trees And Turtles Pristine see through waters Turtles slide by Rock to and fro as they go They are my watch In paradise with cracked coconuts By: Earl Schumacker -Created on 1/09/14 for “SOMEWHERE” Poetry Contest- sponsored by: Nette Onclaud -Using How Many Syllables - count 6,4,7,4,9 = 30 syllables (5 lines)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2015 4:54:00 PM

aha, you are a nature lover. I would be there reading a book probably though I would enjoy watching the turtles for a while!! Cute one!

Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/11/2015 7:30:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. "Somewhere" is a nice place to be. It is a very tranquil "Somewhere." A book is a definite! I'm glad you liked the poem. Have a pleasant evening. Earl

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2015 8:19:00 AM

I love the title, what great imagery; I can see the little ones moving down the shore. 7 and good luck in the contest

Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/9/2015 9:53:00 AM

Hi Eve, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I wish I had more lines to develop the sea, tree and turtle concepts. I will probably create a more well rounded and comprehensive version of this poem in the days to come. Have a great day. Take care. Earl