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Triumphant he eats greens Tooting his trumpet proud Tearfully I gathered Them, my back ached, tender Tendons, twisted muscles Those greens were cooked well done Thank you, no not a one
Date: 4/26/2021 Contest: Pleiades T Sponsor: Kim Merrymen 1Triumphant he eats greens 6 2Tooting his trumpet proud 6 3Tearfully I gathered 6 4Them, my back ached, tender 6 5Tendons, twisted muscles 6 6Those greens were cooked well done 6 7Thank you, no not a one 6 Online Syllable counter

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Date: 4/29/2021 8:21:00 PM
Sara, your story portraying the turnips made me want to thump the ungrateful oaf over the head! All that work and not a thank you! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/29/2021 12:28:00 AM
Lovely Pleiades on turnips Sara.. Enjoyed reading this...Congrats on your win.. Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/29/2021 7:49:00 AM
Anitha, Your congrats is uplifting. Sara
Date: 4/27/2021 9:21:00 PM
Hi Sara and congratulations on your win, I already predicted it you deserve it, have a blessed night, with my very best regards to you
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/28/2021 12:33:00 PM
Lasaad, Thanks for taking the time to drop by to say congrats. Sara
Date: 4/27/2021 8:06:00 PM
Great Pleiades, Sara , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/28/2021 12:31:00 PM
Eve, Your visit to say congrats is encouraging. Sara
Date: 4/27/2021 2:17:00 PM
I would not eat them, but you sure worked hard to get them (and hard on your poem). I remember my phase I went through three years ago when I picked dandelion greens to wash and then cook them up. I did not even like their taste, so I quit doing it!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/27/2021 5:24:00 PM
turnip greens, collard greens and mustard greens yummm with three M's
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2021 3:47:00 PM
Andrea, Yes, gathering those greens then washing them through so many waters is very tiring. It has been worse though when we had to draw the water out of the well. I am glad that today we have running water. God is good in that we have modern convenient. Thanks for your kind review. I would think dandelions would have a bitter flavor. Turnip greens are good if you get them when they are young. Sara
Date: 4/27/2021 7:53:00 AM
I'm not too much on the turnips but the greens, bring'em on! I was raised on turnips and when i got old enough to say no, I haven't eaten them since. Not too fond of radishes neither. Enjoyed the read, Mrs Sara. Hoping you are well:)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2021 3:36:00 PM
Daniel, I was writing about the greens. We are not too much on eating the roots either but I will put a few in there with the greens when there are some but in these spring greens not too many roots and what are there are very small. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 4/27/2021 1:50:00 AM
Do I understand you don't like turnips? No matter you tackled this Pleiades very well. Best for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2021 4:21:00 AM
Victor, I like turnips but they are a pain to gather and wash then to be cooked so someone else will be really happy. I can buy them in the store frozen and I am happy. The fresh ones are better but I am too old to be doing all that work. LOL..Your presence at my work is engaging. Sara
Date: 4/26/2021 9:37:00 PM
Excellent entry here Sara, Love it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2021 4:28:00 AM
Why, thank you, Harry..SK
Date: 4/26/2021 3:45:00 PM
Superb T Pleiades, I see you, good winner, here, your words are flowing just the same as the summer breeze, slowly and nicely. Stay safe and good luck in the contest.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2021 4:33:00 AM
Lasaad, Thanks for the encouraging words. Sara

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