Turning Leaves

dissolving summers yield a muted sheen
and drawn-out shadows over meadows sprawl;
like dappled sunlight, golden peppered green,
the newly turning leaves sketch hints of fall,
in subtle hues at first, to softly blend
and blur the edge of treasured memories
with paths uncharted, yet to comprehend,
still ruffled by the scent of last night’s breeze.
An autumn palette, growing ever deep,
brings ochre, reds and russets from the past,
a richly coloured crop of times to reap
and weave a tapestry to ever last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 10/13/2011 2:20:00 PM
Sharon Looks good as far as I can see , smile. beautiful job. Agapoe, Moses
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Date: 10/12/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Nice to see such variations on the theme. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/12/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congrats Sharon on a superb win with this beautiful composition on leaves for the contest luv.. amazing lines of imagery flowing..how have u been? so happy to see u here again at PS..hope all is well luv..
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Date: 10/12/2011 10:29:00 AM
Nicely written Sharon. Congratulations on your win in the Leaves contest
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Date: 10/12/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in my contest "Leaves Leaves Leaves" judged today 10/12/2011. Thank you for your support of my contest Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2011 3:23:00 PM
Hi Sharon!! :D What a delight to see you here :) and yay for you writing this fall beauty-- I really liked how you touched on autumn in an artistic way, through sketches, painting and weaving-- it just seems so fitting :) & thanks so much for dropping by-- heehee I had fun writing that-- actually it was based on the assignment I did on chocolate tasting, lol :D I hope all is well with you, hugs to you!! :D
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:59:00 PM
Dear Sharon, the leaves and lost memories are 2 symbols that lay with the same kind of sadness... Stopping by to say hi.... Enjoyed the depth and image of your poem .,, thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 10/2/2011 9:03:00 PM
hi & thanks p.d x
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