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Turning Fifty Premiere Contest Winner

I dreaded the age of fifty for years - Half a century is such a bold mark! It told of "old age" and all of its fears, And the loss of that important spark. When it came I began to feel cheated! The signs of "old age" had somehow been missed. The dire predictions had not succeeded At fifty I had been passionately kissed! Well, you see, that was thirty years ago. The feelings of "old age" have now arrived. I face each day without that golden glow, But take comfort that I have been long lived. Now I smile and look back to where I've been. Lord, how I'd love to see fifty again! 4/9/2017 For contest Turning Fifty

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Date: 5/20/2017 1:10:00 AM
Dear Larry the life is pretty short, you will turn to fifty and even die before you even realize it, that the truth of the world, anyway you ve written it beautifully and your poem do touch the hearts however I m new and would like you to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them as one of them is on the same topic
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Date: 5/5/2017 4:31:00 PM
Me too, Larry. I read your poem and it is so true. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:31:00 PM
Ho Ho! Now these are words to be heeded. From one who truly knows! A great little poem Larry. I enjoyed it a lot. Dean
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/1/2017 1:46:00 PM
Thanks, Dean..best wishes in your old age!!LOL
Date: 4/28/2017 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on you poem and your wise old age. Many wishes, Kai
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/1/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Kai
Date: 4/27/2017 8:02:00 AM
Congrats Larry, for your well-deserved first placement, with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/1/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy
Date: 4/27/2017 3:36:00 AM
Nicely done. Congratulations on Your the top win!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/1/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/26/2017 9:38:00 AM
"Fifty", nothin more than a speed bump. Comes up on ya a little to fast. Great job Larry, congratulations...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/26/2017 1:23:00 PM
I agree, Charlie!..Thanks!
Date: 4/26/2017 8:23:00 AM
This is wonderful! Congratulations Larry :) xomo!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/26/2017 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen.
Date: 4/26/2017 8:22:00 AM
Loved it, Larry! Congrats!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/26/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 4/25/2017 2:28:00 PM
Congrats, Larry!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/25/2017 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Kim
Date: 4/25/2017 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/25/2017 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes
Date: 4/25/2017 2:22:00 PM
Hi Larry, I loved your philosophical yet positive approach. Congratulations, Cecelia
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/25/2017 8:41:00 PM
Thank you..Not often you find a contest that seemed made for an old man! LOL

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