Premiere Contest WinnerTurning Fifty

I dreaded the age of fifty for years -
Half a century is such a bold mark!
It told of "old age" and all of its fears,
And the loss of that important spark.

When it came I began to feel cheated!
The signs of "old age" had somehow been missed.
The dire predictions had not succeeded
At fifty I had been passionately kissed!

Well, you see, that was thirty years ago.
The feelings of "old age" have now arrived.
I face each day without that golden glow,
But take comfort that I have been long lived.

Now I smile and look back to where I've been.
Lord, how I'd love to see fifty again!

4/9/2017
For contest Turning Fifty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 1:10 AM
Dear Larry the life is pretty short, you will turn to fifty and even die before you even realize it, that the truth of the world, anyway you ve written it beautifully and your poem do touch the hearts however I m new and would like you to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them as one of them is on the same topic
Duet Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Me too, Larry. I read your poem and it is so true. Congrats on your win!
Wood Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Ho Ho! Now these are words to be heeded. From one who truly knows! A great little poem Larry. I enjoyed it a lot. Dean
Bradfield Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Thanks, Dean..best wishes in your old age!!LOL
Neumann Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on you poem and your wise old age. Many wishes, Kai
Bradfield Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Thank you, Kai
Kimathi Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Congrats Larry, for your well-deserved first placement, with this awesome piece!! ;-)
Bradfield Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, Teddy
Zink Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 3:36 AM
Nicely done. Congratulations on Your the top win!
Bradfield Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Thank you!
Smith Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:38 AM
"Fifty", nothin more than a speed bump. Comes up on ya a little to fast. Great job Larry, congratulations...
Bradfield Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 1:23 PM
I agree, Charlie!..Thanks!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 8:23 AM
This is wonderful! Congratulations Larry :) xomo!
Bradfield Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Maureen.
Chansarkar Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Loved it, Larry! Congrats!
Bradfield Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 2:28 PM
Congrats, Larry!
Bradfield Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:38 PM
Thank you, Kim
Krampe Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Congrats on your win, Larry.
Bradfield Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Thank you, Agnes
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Hi Larry, I loved your philosophical yet positive approach. Congratulations, Cecelia
Bradfield Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Thank you..Not often you find a contest that seemed made for an old man! LOL
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