Turning Back the Hands of Time

On boulevards of memories, with you I walk
Reminiscing in yesteryear as I turn back the clock
And persuade the silence of amour to talk
As conversations of yore ridicule and mock.

When passage of time changed us, losing its way
Feelings that still evoked had nothing to say
And hearts then discarded rules of the game
For love no longer cared to ignite the flame.

Echoes of desires stopped calling your name
When lyrics of our song could no longer claim
Melodies foregone that altered our frame
As I stepped forward alone to take all the blame.

But, regrets that mount have no place to go
Except being drawn into pathos of woe
As winter emerges in the midst of spring--
In passions of ruby rose, its thorns now sting;

Like summer’s heat burns soft autumn breeze
And gusty gales shatter last leaf of barren trees,
When in serenity of blue-skies dark clouds frown
Raining on crimson arc in twilight of sundown.

We now reside in our separate new meadows,
Having barred future from sullen past shadows,
In nights of blissful reverie, kissing dreams of dawn--
Pointless it is to invoke dreadful spirits long gone.

From the fork in the road we’ve traveled far,
In abodes of our distinct worlds happy we are;
View in front is golden glow of vibrant sunrise--
Rear view spurs spent emotions of dreary skies.

October 9, 2019
Placed 2nd: If only we could turn back the hands of time poetry contest
Sponsor: Silent One
HM: Strand contest #670 by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/13/2020 2:44:00 PM
Another magnificent poem, Vijay. Some things are worth remembering and some are not. Wishing you a great weekend :)
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Date: 2/8/2020 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
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Date: 11/17/2019 5:21:00 PM
every thorn has a story holding a rose safe excellent pen deeply beautiful in its essence, i pray you have a beautiful week
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Date: 11/9/2019 12:26:00 PM
Hello Vijay, a beautiful poem you have created. I have enjoyed reading. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/9/2019 9:00:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Vijay! Wonderful imagery and some exceptional lines.
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Date: 11/9/2019 8:30:00 AM
Great poem
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Date: 11/8/2019 10:46:00 PM
The best of the best...what an honor and well deserved. Congratulations. Been way and glad I received notice of this list and seeing you at the top. Keep up the good work.
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Date: 11/8/2019 10:18:00 PM
Congratulation on win
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Date: 11/8/2019 9:31:00 PM
Oh, what a splendid poem, Vijay. And congrats on a well-deserved win.
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:58:00 PM
But, regrets that mount have no place to go Except being drawn into pathos of woe As winter emerges in the midst of spring-- In passions of ruby rose, its thorns now sting; Congratulations on #1. Your "regrets that mount have no place to go except being drawn into pathos of woe" says it all with the three months of winter to work through it all. Thank you.
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay: You are # 1. Great winning poem. SuZ
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Date: 11/8/2019 6:01:00 PM
Yay! Congratulations for being #1 on the Best New Poem List :)
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Date: 11/8/2019 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest and also for having this beautiful piece at the top of the best new poems list Vijay! xxoo : )
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Date: 10/24/2019 2:58:00 PM
Such meaningful words penned so so beautifully Vijay! Although it has some sad memories, it feels very positive! Congrats!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/5/2019 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Smita--much appreciate.
Date: 10/17/2019 7:28:00 AM
Congrats Vijay on an excellent write and a well deserved top win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 2:54:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 10/17/2019 5:01:00 AM
A lovely write...Fluent and clear...Congratulations Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/23/2019 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 10/16/2019 1:06:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with another masterpiece, Vijay. The tone is bittersweet as you look back on passion that died but look forward with hope and peace. Janice
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Date: 10/23/2019 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 10/16/2019 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay, on your placement :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2019 8:58:00 AM
Much appreciate HT--many thanks.
Date: 10/15/2019 3:20:00 PM
I need to go see what you placed. I knew I would be bottom, but I am guessing you were high. Congrats,vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2019 8:58:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 10/15/2019 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations my friend on your winning placement in this contest. Your present such depth, beauty and truth in the loss and regret one feels and knows when a breakup occurs and there is no remedy. A fav.. a jewel that touches the reader's heart and soul.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2019 8:57:00 AM
Much appreciate Robert your kind remarks..many thanks..and a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 10/15/2019 1:57:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your wonderful win... Blessings and love, Gina
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:21:00 AM
Much appreciate the return visit, Gina--many thanks.
Date: 10/14/2019 4:00:00 PM
congratulations my friend, i knew this would be near the top... :) hugs
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:20:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend..thank you for the return visit.
Date: 10/14/2019 3:16:00 PM
Back with many congrats on you winning placement Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit Ann--much appreciate.
Date: 10/14/2019 2:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2019 9:19:00 AM
Much appreciate the return visit, Joseph..many thanks.
Date: 10/14/2019 12:38:00 PM
Wow, I thought I commented on this and I am reading it now and stunned at this well written poem. I love the lines with the ruby rose and the crimson arc. Both lines stand out. Congratulations for your well deserved win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..so glad to read your kind thoughts--much appreciate.
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