Turning Back the Hands of Time

On boulevards of memories, with you I walk
Reminiscing in yesteryear as I turn back the clock
And persuade the silence of amour to talk
As conversations of yore ridicule and mock.

When passage of time changed us, losing its way
Feelings that still evoked had nothing to say
And hearts then discarded rules of the game
For love no longer cared to ignite the flame.

Echoes of desires stopped calling your name
When lyrics of our song could no longer claim
Melodies foregone that altered our frame
As I stepped forward alone to take all the blame.

But, regrets that mount have no place to go
Except being drawn into pathos of woe
As winter emerges in the midst of spring--
In passions of ruby rose, its thorns now sting;

Like summer’s heat burns soft autumn breeze
And gusty gales shatter last leaf of barren trees,
When in serenity of blue-skies dark clouds frown
Raining on crimson arc in twilight of sundown.

We now reside in our separate new meadows,
Having barred future from sullen past shadows,
In nights of blissful reverie, kissing dreams of dawn--
Pointless it is to invoke dreadful spirits long gone.

From the fork in the road we’ve traveled far,
In abodes of our distinct worlds happy we are;
View in front is golden glow of vibrant sunrise--
Rear view spurs spent emotions of dreary skies.

October 9, 2019
Placed 2nd: If only we could turn back the hands of time poetry contest
Sponsor: Silent One
HM: Strand contest #670 by Brian Strand
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Crabtree Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Another magnificent poem, Vijay. Some things are worth remembering and some are not. Wishing you a great weekend :)
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations for your win Vijay :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 5:21 PM
every thorn has a story holding a rose safe excellent pen deeply beautiful in its essence, i pray you have a beautiful week
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Hello Vijay, a beautiful poem you have created. I have enjoyed reading. Have a nice day my friend.
Inman Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Vijay! Wonderful imagery and some exceptional lines.
Price Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Great poem
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 10:46 PM
The best of the best...what an honor and well deserved. Congratulations. Been way and glad I received notice of this list and seeing you at the top. Keep up the good work.
Jangid Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Congratulation on win
Hoffman Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Oh, what a splendid poem, Vijay. And congrats on a well-deserved win.
Anderson Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 6:58 PM
But, regrets that mount have no place to go Except being drawn into pathos of woe As winter emerges in the midst of spring-- In passions of ruby rose, its thorns now sting; Congratulations on #1. Your "regrets that mount have no place to go except being drawn into pathos of woe" says it all with the three months of winter to work through it all. Thank you.
Delaney Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 6:55 PM
Congratulations Vijay: You are # 1. Great winning poem. SuZ
Sands Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Yay! Congratulations for being #1 on the Best New Poem List :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest and also for having this beautiful piece at the top of the best new poems list Vijay! xxoo : )
Kulkarni Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Such meaningful words penned so so beautifully Vijay! Although it has some sad memories, it feels very positive! Congrats!
Pandit Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Smita--much appreciate.
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 7:28 AM
Congrats Vijay on an excellent write and a well deserved top win!
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Thank you John.
Michael Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 5:01 AM
A lovely write...Fluent and clear...Congratulations Vijay
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Canerdy Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 1:06 PM
CONGRATS on your win with another masterpiece, Vijay. The tone is bittersweet as you look back on passion that died but look forward with hope and peace. Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Janice.
There Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations, Vijay, on your placement :)
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Much appreciate HT--many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:20 PM
I need to go see what you placed. I knew I would be bottom, but I am guessing you were high. Congrats,vijay!
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Lindley Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations my friend on your winning placement in this contest. Your present such depth, beauty and truth in the loss and regret one feels and knows when a breakup occurs and there is no remedy. A fav.. a jewel that touches the reader's heart and soul.
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2019 at 8:57 AM
Much appreciate Robert your kind remarks..many thanks..and a special thank you for the FAVE.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 1:57 AM
Back to congratulate you on your wonderful win... Blessings and love, Gina
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Much appreciate the return visit, Gina--many thanks.
Adams Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:00 PM
congratulations my friend, i knew this would be near the top... :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Much appreciate my friend..thank you for the return visit.
Gilmour Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Back with many congrats on you winning placement Vijay. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:20 AM
Thank you for the return visit Ann--much appreciate.
May Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Vijay
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Much appreciate the return visit, Joseph..many thanks.
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 12:38 PM
Wow, I thought I commented on this and I am reading it now and stunned at this well written poem. I love the lines with the ruby rose and the crimson arc. Both lines stand out. Congratulations for your well deserved win Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Heidi..so glad to read your kind thoughts--much appreciate.
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